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Maria Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/12/10

Much too fast with the sex

indignities should come in stages -- as many stages as possible. THEN the fucking. This starts with the fucking and, as a result, has nowhere to go.

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by Anonymous09/13/10

Too early a woman broke down. After all, it must still fight for its status. And he should be more subtly humiliate her clothing is not age, not status, etc. And avoiding publicity. Risk is the base of blackmail!

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by Anonymous11/09/10

i think.

Think its pretty good because most stories takes way too long to get to the sex

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by StoryTeller0711/09/10

Wrong

Thanks for the positive comment. The incoherent comments about blackmail were wrong. We are blackmailed every day of our lives, (when married anyway), by friends and family. My stories explore relationships when under extreme circumstances. Not always very well and the experiment doesn't always work. Any way, blackmail, it's not always the same as on the TV or in films. If one of my stories starts off with sex it probably means there's more to come, if you can't take it continue tomorrow! So! Bollocks! Get your facts right before writing negative comments. You would be on safer ground pointing out the spelling mistakes!

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by Anonymous06/08/11

Don't stop writing! You're one of my favorite authors here and I've been reading your stories since Anniversary Ch1.

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by DesireeFox06/01/13

She has been denying

her true inner slut for too long

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