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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/08/10

not all that unlikely

details may be different, but the situation could very well be real today. great story. thank you.

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by Anonymous09/09/10

Heading . . .

for your prior stories listing. If they are any way near as good, I'm in for a very enjoyable evening of reading. Will make a note of your name in order to watch for later submittals. Keep them cumming.

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by Anonymous09/14/10

Great Story

This theme seems to resonate with a lot of readers. Keep them coming.

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by Anonymous10/06/10

Sons and mothers

A beautiful story, but much too short, Better if the boys had bigger cocks, so the mothers could describe how they felt being stretch to the limit by their young lovers, also being as they are perpetually filled with live semen, wouldn't it be nice if they were both knocked up by the others son,
Now that would be a great story
Jemma

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by oldwayne01/14/11

Not bad.

I gave it Five Stars, but wish they had done their own sons too. Maybe a sequel?????

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by Anonymous06/28/11

I really enjoyed the story

I think we need a part 2 to this story. As far as you have gone is great! However, I think that there could be a sequel or a series if you desire. Thank you for a well written story...It is nice to read a story where the author seems to comprehend english. Again thank you

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by Lelouch09/07/11

What about the other couple?

I think it would have been a good addition to get some scenes of Fran and Joe's activities as well! Or at least, at the end, as Sue and Todd are relaxing and talking post-coitus, they hear the loud moans and thumping bedsprings coming from the next room...

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by Yobo3601/05/12

Good Story BUT....

What happened to Fran and Joe?

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by ChucksSite03/12/12

There was mention of "dicks" and at least one of "cock," but ....

none of "prick." Every other story from Alex uses "prick" - wonder why this one does not? But it was a good story, as noted, quite similar to others, but different enough to make it interesting. Lots of ways this story could progress, and surely, after a few jousts, they might need a bit more variety and spice and the mothers might turn to their sons for pleasure. My imagination is tweaked by this story, and that is what I like about Alex; his stories always leave me wanting more, but guiding me to complete the stories in various ways. Thus, I don't get just one story, but many. Thanks to Alex. Wish I could have voted for you in the contest, but I'm closer now to those that are nearly current. I've come a long way from Alex's year 2000 stories to Sept. 2010 and enjoyed every minute.

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