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In Her Room, Afterwards Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/12/10

Slight Disappointment...

...that the flatmate turned out to be a guy - the tone in the first couple of paragraphs seemed to indicate a woman.

Other than that, let's see how Ch. 2 turns out.

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by Anonymous09/12/10

Excellent

Hope there's more

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by humminbean09/12/10

Off to a thundering start

Wonderful More, please! (There's something about the mental image of a knight in shining armor saving the maiden who's been overcome by her own frigging ...)

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by Anonymous09/13/10

Damn lol

I thot the roomie was also a girl!

lol

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by Drmaxc09/23/10

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What an excellent start to a story. I am intrigued and look forward to finding out what has been going on - you leave various things hanging. Definitely needs Ch. 02

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