Jenna Ch. 01

Please

continue. Just enticing enough to become a great story series. :)

A Brave Start

It takes a brave writer to place a story during slave times in America, but you've done it with an authentic and inoffensive air. I'm a huge history fan, but found some parts of the story to be a bit mired in historical detail. That said, I'm very eager to read future parts!

well done

for a first stoy its really good, better than quite a few ive read..hopefully he will not rape jenna and a romance could build up? looking forward to a second chapter =)

please continue

i like where this is going.

plz keep going

i rly enjoyed the beggining and i hope to read more real soon

The romance can come later when Will shows up, I really hope Thomas rapes her.

Please continue soon.

Great story! please continue it soon

nice

i love ur start i hope u have not let this story good its very good

Awesome!

Please continue... I would like to see what happens next very much I would XD

good start...

When can we expect the next part?

Five!

A great start and would love to know what happen to Jenna. Please do continue with the story.

the best story ive read in a long while

please continue!

*****

Nice start, you should continue.

Five.

wtf

what the fuck is wrong with you people: Jenna was more beautiful than her mother because of her long wavy hair and golden brown skin what a load of shit. it gets a one

re: wtf

Agreed...like really? That's what makes her more beautiful? Slave mentality for a slave story I guess.

Thomas is an Asshole

Thomas is a douchebag he can't respect his dying fathers wish that Jenna remain "innocent" just because his dick gets hard. I wish the preachers son was actually nice and kind, instead of a sex-crazed asshole, who can't even respect his sick father's wish that Jenna stay "innocent".

Excellent

I can hardly wait for another chapter, loved reading this

so good!

loved reading this story! hope you continue it!

Say what?

Please finish!

please

please finsh

OMG finish!!!

It's sooooo good !!!!!

Defintley needs Chapter 2

I'm keen on anything historically based so I was hooked when I read the tag line

Its good - really good but it is screaming out for completion - just a great little story as it stands but you could take so much further

disturbed and confused

Why the hell does every one on this site think its not rape if you hurt and threaten a girl into pretending she likes. Biology says your body responds that doesnt make it sex and not rape so annoying

@interweb88: Why the hell are you in non-con section if you're not into it?