by Algonquin Twit
With a mother like he has, why would he need to look for a girlfriend?
I think they need to do more than just talk after the party is over, she should wake up the next morning with a sore pussy thats full of her son's cum.
Thanks for the story, maybe the author will write another chapter on this concept.
Where oh where do I begin? This story was written in a hell of a rush.
Nothing wrong with a brief snapshot of how good things happen spontaneously without tons of buildup, but I'm left wanting more here.
You do a good job of painting the scene of a college party, you even have mom state her motivation for the blowjob, in case we had any doubt. I like the son's hesitation and halfhearted attempts to get mom to respect his boundaries. I like how the GF freaks and bails and IMHO that's excellent writing.
I'd really like to see where things go in Ch. 2. Every author's got a different story to tell, but I like some emotion behind the boinking in both the mom and son's cases. XXXcellent work! Keep 'em cummin'!
I can't WAIT to see this talk. I just wonder was is going to happen at this party. That is the title after all.
Who is this guy, King Shit of Turd Mountain? He should be grateful that a girl is willing to be seen in public with his ugly ass, and he should be glad for whatever she's prepared to give him; just because she's his girlfriend doesn't mean she's bound by law to blow him or fuck him just because that's what he thinks he's due. You're a chauvinist pig, and your story sucks like shit through a straw. No stars, this story is complete crap, from a crap writer.