maybe he should find a school close enough so he could live at home.
With a mother like he has, why would he need to look for a girlfriend?
I think they need to do more than just talk after the party is over, she should wake up the next morning with a sore pussy thats full of her son's cum.
Thanks for the story, maybe the author will write another chapter on this concept.
Where oh where do I begin? This story was written in a hell of a rush.
Nothing wrong with a brief snapshot of how good things happen spontaneously without tons of buildup, but I'm left wanting more here.
You do a good job of painting the scene of a college party, you even have mom state her motivation for the blowjob, in case we had any doubt. I like the son's hesitation and halfhearted attempts to get mom to respect his boundaries. I like how the GF freaks and bails and IMHO that's excellent writing.
I'd really like to see where things go in Ch. 2. Every author's got a different story to tell, but I like some emotion behind the boinking in both the mom and son's cases. XXXcellent work! Keep 'em cummin'!
I can't WAIT to see this talk. I just wonder was is going to happen at this party. That is the title after all.
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Anonymous09/15/10
I agree with his girlfriend
They're both freaks.
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Anonymous07/04/14
His girlfriend should know what a man expects, and do it for him, because that's what he wants?
Who is this guy, King Shit of Turd Mountain? He should be grateful that a girl is willing to be seen in public with his ugly ass, and he should be glad for whatever she's prepared to give him; just because she's his girlfriend doesn't mean she's bound by law to blow him or fuck him just because that's what he thinks he's due. You're a chauvinist pig, and your story sucks like shit through a straw. No stars, this story is complete crap, from a crap writer.
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maybe he should find a school close enough so he could live at home.
With a mother like he has, why would he need to look for a girlfriend?
I think they need to do more than just talk after the party is over, she should wake up the next morning with a sore pussy thats full of her son's cum.
Thanks for the story, maybe the author will write another chapter on this concept.
next Chapter
Please!!!
Sequel?
Chapter 2 please.
Nice quickie!
Where oh where do I begin? This story was written in a hell of a rush.
Nothing wrong with a brief snapshot of how good things happen spontaneously without tons of buildup, but I'm left wanting more here.
You do a good job of painting the scene of a college party, you even have mom state her motivation for the blowjob, in case we had any doubt. I like the son's hesitation and halfhearted attempts to get mom to respect his boundaries. I like how the GF freaks and bails and IMHO that's excellent writing.
I'd really like to see where things go in Ch. 2. Every author's got a different story to tell, but I like some emotion behind the boinking in both the mom and son's cases. XXXcellent work! Keep 'em cummin'!
Oh boy.
I can't WAIT to see this talk. I just wonder was is going to happen at this party. That is the title after all.
I agree with his girlfriend
They're both freaks.
His girlfriend should know what a man expects, and do it for him, because that's what he wants?
Who is this guy, King Shit of Turd Mountain? He should be grateful that a girl is willing to be seen in public with his ugly ass, and he should be glad for whatever she's prepared to give him; just because she's his girlfriend doesn't mean she's bound by law to blow him or fuck him just because that's what he thinks he's due. You're a chauvinist pig, and your story sucks like shit through a straw. No stars, this story is complete crap, from a crap writer.
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