Just the Six of Us Ch. 03

I like.

Keep it up! ;D

Love it

I really like the way you haven't rushed the story along, cant wait to read more.

Don't Lose the humor.

Unlike some people, and I have to agree with them sometimes, I like the build-up. It's like foreplay. It makes the climax (both kinds) much better. Keep it going. Ron

to unrealistic

no guy is going to just sit there talking to his sister nude with a hardon doesn't anyone here have locks on thier doors with four sisters i'm sure he does

Great Story

This is a great story. Keep going and don't worry about the negative comments, they have no imagination. They just want instant gratification in the first five lines.
Good luck

very well written and erotic

I love the build-up, and the pace is just perfect.

Awesome!

Winner. Great stuff, thanks!

Great story line

This a great story, can't wait for the rest.

Wow, very well written and exciting.

I can't wait to read the coming chapters.

Special bonding

Jerry in Washington State, USA - I loved this chapter. I loved the special bonding between Mike and Sarah. I love her motherly nuturing side and her sexy side. The sex between them was especially hot since it showed how much they love each other.

You are a good story teller.

I can't wait to read the rest.

I like it!

Funny and very erotic.
Excellent stuff!

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just found your stories..started at the beginning and its great so far.

A crazy meat slapping perverted freak

Love the story; love the humor. But, the best parts may be your bizarre phrases such as the one above. You are a talented but sick little puppy...

Awesome

i had the most intense orgasm in my life! normally I last longer than half an hour, but I lasted like 10 mins!

Very funny!

"The part of Mike's brain that usually didn't speak directly to him, the moral side, suddenly woke up at that point and wondering just what the hell was going on. The voice sucker punched it, knocking it out again."

"The voice sucker punched it, knocking it out again."
Extremely funny!

Great work keep it up

This is a wonderful chapter I'm glad it was Sarah that made something happen. It felt natural and you didn't rush actual sex. The only thing I found a little strange was jumping back and forth from what he felt to her and back. But thats minor the quirky things he says is great keep up the wonderful job :)

Good

I am actually impressed with the story line. I agree with someone above here, you are talented but sick. I did imagine wishing I had a brother who fantasized about me, but it's harmless simply because I think if I had one, I don't think it would ever go there. So far, so good. The story is enthralling and you can probably get it published. I've read worst, but haven't finished reading this one. 4 sisters seems like a load though.

You're not sick

Nah...I don't think you're sick at all. You're not some puritanical, inhibited individual. What you are is creative, sensual, sexy, and exciting.

Impressive

I actually felt that this could actually happen. You made it seem so natural that I wonder if this is a true story. Sarah is portrays a lot of roles and does it seamlessly. She's a mother figure to all of them. She is a caring sister to Mike and shows she can be a friend as well.

I actually don't have any criticism for this chapter. The humor is well-placed and the emotions are very real.

Keep it up.

So Touching

This might sound odd but I cried to this in the sense because of the love between the brother and sister. I loved how it didn't turn into wham bam thank you maam. It was more about love, fufillment, and beauty. Things I hope to learn about someday. Keep Writing! :)

I just found your work. I thought the set up was a tad unrealistic since they kinda just jumped into the sexual hijinks. The writing is fantastic though, so I just suspend my disbelief and enjoy.

Very, very funny...

and then I had to reach for a glass of cold water.

SO SO GOOD

CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE

HOW DO YOU DO THAT?!!!!

How did you make such an eroticly taboo subject and situation seem soooooo normal, sexy and HOT?!!! Hell, it was "romantic" as well. YOU'RE DAMN GOOD! It's YOUR universe master and I'm just a Peeping Tom passing through! Great job!

Been awhile

Yo ive been a fan of this site for years and of this subject just as long. I havent been here for awhile and this was the firsr story i began to read and i must say DUDE THIS IS THE ISH

She would have been so very helpful

Wow, where was a sister like Sarah when I was growing up? She is a very good helper, clearly going above and beyond the call of duty here. Very impressive. Keep doing what you do MC and we'll keep reading.

Damn!

lol his cure is making sweet sweet love to his sister. Seriously love the way you write. I really think this would make an awesome book. your plot, everything, pulls me in and makes me want more. I didnt realize till I started to read you stuff, that it is much more. . . . . fulfilling i think is the word, than the typical wham bam stories on this site. Thank you, humor and eroticism go perfect together lol

oh my see it has started, one down 3 more how fun

On my second read through of your story and it's still good! Especially The Voice, which I find to be hilarious! That is probably the most original story idea I've ever seen on Literotica.

I'd seriously LOVE to see a lot more stories in the incest section along this vein, with a brother and multiple sisters. There are a few, just not very many :(. I need to compile a list!

Wow

Love this sisters they rule.

Not bad

So many incest stories I've read seem to end up being: "Oh! Wait, are you jerking off? You know... if you want... I could help you with that?"

I guess it's an unavoidable situation though. Not very many other ways to enter that kind of situation. I still love this story though.

MOST IMPORTANT QUESTION

umm....i loved the story...but what i don't get is why is the title named as "just the six of us" when there are only 5 characters....mike and 4 sisters....
p.s- i just started reading....currently chapter 4

Dear anonymous

Mike, his sisters, and the voice makes 6.

verry erotic

looking forward to more

Simply Amazing

This is just awesome! The fact that you are able to
have such detailed erotic content while having a good
story line is simply wonderful! And the comedy... oh
God the comedy. I died laughing when the voice
sucker punched his morals.