Great little tale, Tio Narratore. You kept to the theme of the contest and it was short and sweet in more ways than one. If we ever meet on the dunes at the cape, I'm the love that you looked for, come with me and escape. I'll bring the pina coladas.
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Anonymous09/11/10
Very vivid descriptions and impressive vocabulary, well done
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Anonymous11/14/12
Pearls
Descriptive of physical encounter.... but where are the pearls cast from the heart, the gleam on the currents which surge in the soul? What moves beneath the sea within each person, causing the wave to rise to the skies?
Lovely body impressions left on the shore, but it could have been more...
A classy EC story. Loved the descriptions, art references, the length, and the end. Most importantly, a well crafted story about older characters. Voted a 5.
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Holy Cow!
That could have been me! Nice little story, Tio. Mature and hot.
I Like It
Great little tale, Tio Narratore. You kept to the theme of the contest and it was short and sweet in more ways than one. If we ever meet on the dunes at the cape, I'm the love that you looked for, come with me and escape. I'll bring the pina coladas.
Very vivid descriptions and impressive vocabulary, well done
Pearls
Descriptive of physical encounter.... but where are the pearls cast from the heart, the gleam on the currents which surge in the soul? What moves beneath the sea within each person, causing the wave to rise to the skies?
Lovely body impressions left on the shore, but it could have been more...
Lovely EC story
A classy EC story. Loved the descriptions, art references, the length, and the end. Most importantly, a well crafted story about older characters. Voted a 5.
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