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Duh??
Something about the ending didn't work at all for me. I understand denial and delayed reaction, but that's not quite what came out.
He's a moron (His wife is right)
So I don't really care what happens to him. But the ending doesn't add up. She is so mad about him introducing others into their marriage that she won't talk with him for a week and then, all of a sudden, she's off to fuck other guys? If she's decided other guys are OK, why is she still mad? Why not, WOW I never realized I had that in me. You've let the genie out of the bottle honey. You are going to have to share me from now on. But, as I said, he's a moron so the rest of it doesn't matter.
I think the story line was a bit of a stretch for my imagination
Maybe she just protested a little too much, and to have found out who Dave was, since he was her husband's friend from work.
Good story though, seemed to keep my interest through out, and was a smooth reading story. Thanks
Snapped my neck again!
Should have seen it coming....but you got me with her indignation, and I fell for it. Good read...now if only Mandy01 will do her thing and take it another chapter or two......
and?
and the story goes.... to....
what happen next .... divorce... stay married .... or what
Nasty, but not in a good way
He's an idiot, his friends are rapists, she's a racist who's become a slut. The world would be better off without them.
One Of JPB's best efforts!
I loved the twist. The wife going ballistic, and then the fianl slap to the face or was it the3 genitals!
Good job, JPB!
Best regards,
C
BAD
NOT JUST BAD, BUT
REALLY, REALLY, FUCKING BAD!
Same old dog shit!
Keeping em coming JPB.
Bob's in the house!!!!!!!!!!
Please let him go home so he can write a real story !! LOL at the story.
Mistake/Discovery/Leave
JPB,
Dimwit thought he was doing her a special thing. It WAS always her fantasy. So, she was pissed at him for doing it...well JPB - a loving wife might still have been upset, would have understood his stupidity and good intentions and maybe fumed for a few days.
She has decided to use him as a security base, house, image and reputation while she now goes out and has a hell of a good time.
Epilogue: He may have been mistaken by her fantasy but he is not mistaken about her new found infidelity and the fact that she plans to cuck him with his friends. How about it, he packs, loads his car up, gets a room for the weekend, Monday he sees a lawyer for a divorce with irreconcilable differences, arranges for a transfer, moves funds, gives a power of attorney to his attorney and leaves. He'll always love the woman he knew, not the new one.
Old wayne was,
right this wasn't just bad it was really bad.
Another old folks story
so I rated it 1*
Yes, He Really Blew It
However, her turnaround was a bit too much to believe. If he is smart, he won't wait up. As soon as he cancels the credit cards, moves the money and finds a nice motel, he will settle in for a good night's sleep.
Then don't bother coming home
As you don't live here anymore if you walk out that door. Then make good on your words. Pack up all her stuff in garbage bags, change the locks, change the garage door code, cancel the credit cards and be prepared to be at the bank when it open tomorrow morning. AS JPB has written before, possession is 9/10's of the law. She wants to be a slut, let her.
Stupid...BUT
He wrongly concluded what she might like, she did, but she claims she never would do blacks so...!
She did come back to her black rape fantasy repeatedly so what would he think. This guy loved her, trusted her and thought that she would enjoy this - which she did so...
Getting upset at him, her logic made sense and keeping him at bay for a week while she considered how she would/might forgive him was one thing BUT - The note, drinks with Dave and don't wait up...
This guy didn't come across as a cuckold and JPB - you could have added one more paragraph and simply suggested or wrote...
He was/had been totally and monogamously in love with her. He screwed up with good intentions. He was not/is not a cuckold by nature and sadly he would pack some bags, take some important items he needed, move to a Motel for the weekend, go to bank on Monday and see a lawyer...
This guy would leave a note and simply write...Yes I screwed up, meant well but was foolish, hoped you would forgive me and maybe you have but fantasy was one thing, my screw up was one thing but your deciding to cheat either with blacks or whites - doesn't matter, I am not and will not be a cuckold. I'll get a lawyer and file under irreconcialable differences unless you fight me and then I would be forced to protect my honor, my integrity and my manhood and retaliate. For the best of the past, don't call me and just sign the divorce papers when you are served.
I really and truly loved you but not this you...goodbye, live well!
Your ex husband
Thanks Bob, I guess that was more than a paragraph but most of us would ;like your finished endings, even though we disagree a lot. This ending was good, just wanted a touch more.
Thanks again!
He was wrong, but now she's a slut so.....
It's time to file for the divorce. And since he knows Dave he has a witness to her cheating. He'll make out just fine in the divorce. And when he files using adultery and lets all her family and friends know what she's doing, things will really be just fine for him.
didnt like it? thats B.S!
so where is the rest of the story I would like to read about what happened when she got home was there or did he pack up and leave ? is she now a BBC slut now? seems maybe she is so where is the rest of the story?
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