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by Starm

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
first ok but second.......

Think you might want to look at getting someone to proofread these for you.... rub her CLICK?? Clit maybe? or STI's??????? whats a STI?? Its STD's.

StarmStarmover 13 years agoAuthor
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STI: "Sexually Transmitted Infection"

The other typos are definitely just mistakes, though. I'll make sure to copy-edit the next one better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Poorly written, lots of typos. " To be fare" instead of fair, for instance. Suggest you review this more closely.

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