by KissnTellJessie
Who's Jane, sleeping in the other bed? Her name is mentioned only once, but it did confuse me because I thought it was only Jamie, Sarah and YOU.
it was just the three of us fucking but Jane was in the room too. We thought about waking her up but she was very drunk & I think he already had as much as he could handle!
It made it even hotter in the morning, trying not to laugh or let on what had happened in front of her.
More! Nice writing, good pacing, lucious description of every stroke and kiss. Lit needs more writing like this.
Quite superb Jessie - you are clearly a very talented erotic writer, and your story has the unmistakable ring of authenticity. I can just imagine you and Sarah giving Jamie the time of his life, and both of you loving every minute of it. Well done.