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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/15/10

Best in years

You had the balls to be different and I loved it . Well done !

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by Anonymous09/15/10

Love the twist

didnt expect that at the end well done wonder if he turns up as well?

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by Paul Reagan09/16/10

Good work

The photo-by-photo descriptions were a nice stylistic touch. I did not see that ending come at all, and the impact is exaggerated by it being the last sentence in the story. Nice touch, good work overall!

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by Anonymous12/09/10

kinda hot but creepy at the same time

you had my pussy nice and wet, all the way until that last bit. i did not see that coming at all. it was so odd and different, def. give you props for uniqueness. but just kinda gave me goosebumps at the same time for some odd reason. i mean it was a lil creepy. :P
but anywho. good story.

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by rock675207/16/11

Is there/should there be a part 2?

I think that a part two would be good.

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by Anonymous11/05/12

Very clever

This was brilliantly conceived, and the sting in the tail was a touch of genius.
The only reason I didn't give it five stars was its brevity.

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by Anonymous02/23/15

Thank gawd for the twist(ed) ending! Putting myself mentally in place of this guy, thinking he was the dad, it was a total turnoff thinking my daughters were fucking all these guys! :/. If Im going to be thinking about myself as an incest daddy, then theres No. Fucking. Sharing! ...well 'cept between the sisters... Otherwise Im mentally being cruel and telling them not to come around, because I sure as hell don't want sloppy fourths (and no telling who else), much less thinking Im way down the list. Major turnoff!!

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by Anonymous05/12/16

best story on this site...awesome!!!!!

I LOVED IT!!!!

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by Anonymous11/06/16

didn't expect that

good story and the twist at the end, just brilliant

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