Running Late

Great Fantasy

Needs a ton of back story for this to be anything more that someones personal fantasy in print. Still your writing is good technically and hopefully you will continue.

What an asshole

Enough said

Another wimp writer

This guy let's his wife fuck two niggers and then goes on with their little game playing. Please don't write another story. This one is enough shit for one day.. WIMP, WHORE, SKANK, NIGGER FUCKING SLUT. WANT MORE????

You

SUCK...

Suck part 2 ?

DON'T BOTHER.

It's rape when she says no.

So her husband, the man who is supposed to be her best friend, her partner and confident, the guy who is supposed to have her back, is jerking off while she's being raped. Fucking asshat needs to have his rectum rootered considierng he's a fucking queer.

Maulstick=Small dick.

You pathetic piece of dogshit. As for your 'characters'? A whore/slut that wanted to be fucked by the men. It wasn't rape. She gave her consent. As for teh husband? you could not have written a more stupid pathetic asshole of a husband. Juts another sissy boy husband and a sissy boy writer to write about him.

Please Do Continue

Nicely done. This story was well written and quite erotic. Even the detractors of this story were emotionally affected and likely enjoyed it (if they were honest with themselves) as much as me. So please do continue the story and thanks.

There is absolutely not one thing original....

...in this story. Why did you post it. Not one element of this hasn't been done to death.

remember

remember, when you get out of prison you promise to learn to read and write.

yeeeehaaa!!!!

fuck the skank up good n slap her round too

A sad story in lots of ways.

The fact that the husband got of on seeign his wife fuck someone else. Sad that the writer had to include two black men in the story. Sad that any woman married or otherwise would find this a turn on. Even as a fantasy it fails. Unless people like nightmares or course which this is.

Good first effort!

Nicely done.
Don't let some idiots that don't seem to like this genera of writing get you down. For some reason, these folks read and negatively comment on stories such as these when they would be better off not reading them to begin with.
Go figure!
Keep up the good work and I will be looking forward to the next part of the story.

No redeeming value of any kind!

It does qualify as a story. A story that has been told a hundred times (ninety-six of them better than this one) on this site. Some left out the stereotypes and racial slurs. I was disappointed.

Sad

What sick bastard would hide in the restroom listening to 2 guys rape his wife. Oh wait, I know...a sick pussy. Really.

I was hoping that he would have saved her from being raped

Even a ball point pen can be used as a weapon in such times as he had, so he had no excuse for not helping her.

The story came off showing the husband as a real girly boy wimp. I sure wouldn't want him watching my back for me.

I hope that this story has a better second chapter.

This Was A Real Piece Of Shit.

What a turn off, puke.

This is NOT a story about why the husband

did not want to "help" the wife being ganed raped in the bathroom;

rather, it is the story of a wife and husband who enjoy having the wife being raped, but BOTH pretending neither knows what's really happening to the other, in a suriptitiously surrendipity, as each times their parallel/concurrent activities carefully...

e.g.: both pretend to be on the phone, talking to each other, seriously, innocently.... while one pretend her/his phone is having trouble, so they'd jus rendezvous at the pre-arranged place; and having one partner, usually the husband, being a bit late, so he could come and catch, at the tale end of it, the wife being molested, raped, or kissed in the dark or in bathroom.... only momentarily coming out, after checking her make up... saying:

"Hi, honey, you're a few minutes late!" "Oh, I am so sorry, but as you know, the traffic was really bad, but I am here now, so let's go do our own things," etc.

The next phase, afterh they're tired of this, is of course to have the manly man tape the wife being mauled and gangraped, screaming the end of the earth is coming but she's okay, since she has orgasm from beginning to end of the "rape"... in some motel, with the guy asking if the wife likes to take a break for some water... with her saying, "Could you, honey, just bring me some bottle, as I am busy here, as you can see... come, be a darling, lay down your camera and give me some water."

Junk

Nothing more than junk... truly a waste of time. Agree with the other comments....... nothing more than sickening.

Just another english pub talker into male humiliation & self disrespect

why is it writer that you try to create a simpering weak excuse for a man?

In your likeness is the conclusion of 99.9% of readers - anyone who would spend the time to render the pile of subhuman crap must need negative attention rather than none.

Pretty Sad little sick one.

Another piss-poor wimp effort!

Bloody boring these examples of trash.

what the fuck!?!?

he let's her get raped? if she planned it then fine! but what the hell is this shit!?!

I came in 2-3 mins

this story is really hot!!!

Sick

What kind of sick dick writes this crap. If she planned the attack fine, but it was'nt written as such. It sounds like you would like to be gang raped by a bunch of prisoners.

You are one sick puppy!! he LETS her get raped?

Good thing you crawled back under the fucking rock you came out from and didn't continue this shit

you are one sick fuck!

Horrible

Fucking disgusting.

Another black delusion!

Only a limp dick would sit there and let his hot wife get fucked ny two STD mules.

Wrong section!

This one should better be in the "non consent/reluctant" section. It's hard to believe that hearing her being beaten hasn't won the excitement. Not really a loving husband, more a perv SOB.

Wish she was my wife

This is a great story. Waiting for more.. .

Stopped reading when he let her get raped

1star

It should get you to think...

...when you regard the fact that the only positive reaction this story generates comes from "anonymous"; Goes to show: It takes a cuck to live those stories..(or to write them)

hotwife

Sounds as both enjoyed