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by imurddy09/19/10

erotic horror?

Well, you have the beginnings of an interesting story, but it was too short, and it lacks a certain element. Horror! To have horror, you have to have fear, it was more like erotic mysticism. I found it interesting, though. Develop it some more, put some fear in it, or change the category, maybe non-human? Keep trying, I liked your style.

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