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Come Together

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/17/10

Yikes!

Wet now!

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by Anonymous09/17/10

Don't like Catholic School Girl stories, but . . .

This was well done. Tasteful and romantic, altogether credible. Would love to see it continue.

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by Anonymous09/17/10

Well, well written. Please continue to write more, you have a real talent that you must continue to use. Thank you.

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by Anonymous09/17/10

Great Start

I thoroughly enjoyed this. Ms. or Mrs. Wilson may have broke down a bit early, but I aspect this is only the beginning. What will happen next, who will teach whom, and what will be taught? Love this journey!

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by jessijessi3409/17/10

Good start

This is excellent, but more buildup would have made the ending much more exciting... Maybe starting with when the author figured out her teacher was attractive... and what she did over time to lure her in...

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by Anonymous09/22/10

please continue to write

That was one of the best stories ; i've read. It left me wanting more. How very erotic!

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oh goodness

That was very well done. i read your story a while back and had this urge to read it again... took some searching(couldnt remember your name or its title) It was better then i remember, love the details. Cant wait for more

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Teacher and student love affairs can be so hot. So is the case for Come Together

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