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The Girl Next Door Ch. 01

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by peteinchicago09/17/10

Pretty good so far

While I can understand being aroused by 2 chicks fucking, I'd divorce this bitch. Shit, I'd have divorced her for her attitude even before she started cheating. It'd be fun if Paula was unaware of the cameras untill he talked to her about his soon to be ex wife. Him doing Paula while kicking the bitch of an exwife to the curb would be great. She changed the rules, can't blame him if he takes advantage!

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by Average_Writer09/17/10

Simple answer? Yes it is cheating.

As the husband said he didn't GIVE her permission to fuck someone else. but she did it anyway. The marriage is over. Time to move on and find someone that actually cares about the husband. His wife doesn't need him anymore. Divorce is the only way forward.

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by Pistolpackinpete09/17/10

Good writer.....not much of a story.....

....absolutely no drama.....zzzzzzz.....

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Well, isn't he just

a little butt-head? Not really sure what he wants out of all this, but it really doesn't help make the story sexier. He barely even seems to enjoy watching them remotely. I know, I know, he wasn't being a voyeur, he was getting leverage. At least he could get something out of it that Lit readers would enjoy.

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by Anonymous07/02/16

Boring.

Really. Awfully boring. Totally. Completely idiotic characters. Plot, what little thrte was, was simply... Well, hey, this story just suckd. Nothing lesbian aboyt this. It's jyst stupid male crowing. Yuck!

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by Anonymous07/03/16

This is not a lesbian story.

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