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Highland Magic Ch. 25

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/17/10

This is the same post as the previous chapter

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by kitten082909/17/10

?????

why is chapter 25 the same as chapter 24

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by Anonymous09/18/10

ditto on the previous posts...

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by BlushingInnocent07/30/12

Confused...

I really like the premise of your story, and overall it's quite well thought out but you keep slipping up on some of the details( like the year, and where in the story we are) you jump around a bit sometimes and it can make it hard to keep up with the story.

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