All Comments on 'Mario's Restaurant and Louise'

and typos detracted from an uninspired story.

"it was the most bazaar thing she had ever done"

Bazaar - A marketplace, particularly in the Middle East, with shops and stalls.

And if that wasn't bad enough, this tale conjures up many spectres of bodily products in food, hamburgers foremost in the mind.

For those Two Reasons, I left this course on my plate.

Distastefully,

Kilroy

"Fabby" is an odd nickname for a man. Half of the plot, at least at the beginning with the aphrodisiac desserts, was similar to "Chocolat." Why is he cooking British food if he's Italian? I looked up Toad in the Hole -- I can't imagine an Italian spin on that. And the grammar and punctuation errors made it nigh on unreadable. Sorry.

Fully appreciate, like food, this is not to everyone's taste but have done a sequel which may be more to your liking I hope

I realise the typo's and such, I guess I should have taken more care with the editing, I will do so in future