All Comments on 'Bedding the Babysitter Ch. 01'

Please continue it was incredibly hot

we want....

you to continue

hope to see more of this story soon

I hope you continue this storyline between the older woman and the babbysitter. I'd like to see what you do with the storyline and how the older woman shares her with her lesbian friends.

Very good narrative and build up of the seduction. I even liked the shout out to your own story, "The Complete Submission"! Please continue the series, perhaps with her seducing other young women. My only recommendation is that you spend more time on the actual sex between the two women. You're writing of this part of your stories is very good, so just provide a little more of it.

Keep going anxious to see how far the older woman will bring the babysitter!!!!

Nice build up & seduction, plenty of possibilities for progression & further submissions.

Nice start to a great story. Would like to see more.

Now that you have the babysitter, use your computer skills to fulfill her dream about bedding the cheerleader.

My first ever comment on a story, it has all the hallmarks of a great series, it has started so slowly and well , lvely build up , i so want too read more of the mistress and her babysitter.

Great Story Please Continue

....you must be tough to be married to eh?

get her pierced and tattoed or something like that....mark her as a slave.

This is a very hot story, and I love your attention to detail: stockings, etc. Please continue telling the tale of how the younger woman is turned into a sex slave.

Please write more i need it so badly!

very good story so far. I look forward to the next chapter.

i thourly enjoyed it. want to find out what results red stockings get her . actually i was stroking my cock cause as i began to see wher your messining was going i began to get hard. just imanging you breaking in a new slave is exciting to me,..................butr pleaze i'd lovre to read moer of ur writings

I agree with all of the other comments. There is so many other chapters of this story that agr begging you to write them. I would like to add my wishes to theirs. Please write more.

Wow it was one of the best stories I have read on Lit. Gave it a 5 out of 5. You've been added to my favorites list and am looking forward to more of your stuff.

This is my first letter to a writer. Please keep up the weighting. I am SO into domination / submission between girls. Sometimes I think I'm a lesbian born into a man's body. I've never done either D or S in my sex life but heres to the future.

Expect more feedback as I read more. If your looking for ideas there is a series of comic books called "Housewives at Play" by a lady named Rebecca, that was really into lesbian D/S as well as the bondage stuff. I'd love to see you write stories like that.

The only suggestion I could ask is that you give a paragraph describing the characters in your story so us "visually dependent people" can better picture the characters of the story.

If you would like you can Email me at Lit or my personal Email that you can find on my account.

To sum it up, please keep up the great work

Your newest fan,

Don

P.S. Like the picture on your account too. You one sexy lady.

one a lot. I hope ypou finsh it and continue to write more.

Great story. I'd love to see what else Meg has in store for her toy. This is just the beginning.

I am a 17 year old guy and I really enjoy your stories. One concern I do have is that your stories are too predictable. Always stockings, almost always black women dominating white women and so on. I would also appreciate it if you proofread your stories before publishing. I notice a lot of simple mistakes and if you fix them your stories will be a lot better. Thanks. :)

love your stories , i wish there were more writers like you , my favorites are of sexy black women dominating white women or young black women dominating older white women im one of your biggest fans

I love everything you've written. The bedding the babysitter series needs some new chapters!

Ok lemme just say im reading these "baby sitter" stories and omg there amazing! I just keep cumming and cumming... Im 13 and imma guy... I love erotica suprisingly its better than porn... Well i hope you enjoy my comment cause i love it and i hope you continue to make more stories!!!

this reminded me of my friend Candy she loves nylons too (: itold heer about it. (:

This story reminds me of my friend Jayne. I imagine myself as the schoolgirl and Jayne as the lesbian. She told me about the story and to go and read it. I really like imagining Jayne doing all these things to me. So naughty.

She's right I really do like nylons, stockings, pantyhose and stuff like that. I like how they feel on my skin, so tight n silky. I think she likes when I wear them too...

Thanks Jayne for opening me up to new possibilities.

XXOO

Candy

OMG what you've done to me now. I'm 17 and going to be a senior next month in a high school class of 136 students. I've been active in sports but have led a sheltered life and have noticed some of my classmates in the shower, and there is one girl there that I'd love to get to know better, but don't think there is a chance, but her mother is a beautiful woman and I have babysat for her on two occasions and now after reading your story, would love to have her make love to me like you did here. How do I get her to know that?

Omg dis story got me wet I played wit my clit at the thought of being dominanted by an older women please finish it off

To the other person who posted about noticing girls at school and wanting their friend's mom.

I'd recommend your wear some nice clothes, try to get her to notice you. Maybe ask her some questions... like about sex and stuff, get her to talk to you in private... try and stand close to her, maybe rub your body against her a little...

Jayne has been getting me to try new things with her, and even though I don't know that much yet.. I think that stuff would be a good start for you.

Thanks again Jayne for all you do to me!!! I love how you are making me spread open for you, even if it is a little bit at a time. Thanks for being so patient with me.

Sincerely,

Candy

XXOO to Jayne

OK. IN ALL THE BABY SITTER STORIES YOU NEVER DEVELOPED THE FACT THAT SHE WAS THE CHEER LEADERS SLUT. I THINK A STORY OF THE CHEER LEADERS USING HER AND EACH OTHER WOULD BE A GREAT SEXY STORY. WOULD MAKE ME CUM MANY TIMES THINKING OF ALL THOSE 18 YEAR OLDS SUCKING AND FUCKING AND WHO WOULD COME IN ON IT BUT SOME OF THEIR MOTHERS WHO GET IN ON THE ACTION. HOW ABOUT THAT JENNY.

WALT

I like it ... you tell a very good story ... From experience?

I'm glad that you already have written more parts to this or I'd be going nuts! LOL

A great piece of writing. Had me cumming by page 2!. This is the first story of yours I have read, but I intend on reading all the rest.....quickly! I look forward to many more orgasms, courtesy of your outstanding work.

Made me wet

One of the most erotic stories I have ever read!

Hi Jayne

It's candy

I don't have your contact info anymore

I really wanna chat with you

Xxoo

Candy

I am looking forward to reading the next installment....

Wow. Very exciting story as all your stories so far.

Yes, really hot, good writing about sums it up. I'll just add that I thought the story of the relationship between the lesbian MILF and the unsure, submissive girl, who became her willing slave, was well crafted. Whether you are a dominant person or a submissive type, you could certainly identify with what was happening in this story.

This is my 2nd story by you. I guess I am hooked now.

You are great. My complaints are so few they are not worth mentioning. Please keep up the great story telling or we will come after you (smile).

I am putting you in my favorite authors list shortly.

Another stunner!

It's not just about the sex, though as ever with your stories it's amazing, but I love the characters and look forward to getting to know more about them as I read more of this series.

Thank you,

Andy

that was a great, interesting read. have yet to read many good lesbian erotic stories on here so thankyou for writing the best one ive read so far. liked the story within the story too cept it seemed more immaturely written if that makes sense but of course it was from jennys perspective so that makes it a clever comparison with how you have written from megans perspective. nice one ;)

Love this story. This story was definitely turning me on and my mistress is currently out of the country. I'm learning to be a sub which is something new to me but your story is like totally amazing. I hope I will be as eager as the babysitter.

omg i love it!!!!! it got me so wet i cant wait to read the rest! Laura x

That's was a great story I'm horny now. I love seduction story's the best

My cock has never been this hard in my life. So fucking amazing

The very first thing I read from you and - I'm a fan.

You certainly can write a story , develop a plot, you have real-live persons and

excellent dialogues. Really wonderful.

This was a really great story , sure wish I could find a mistress close to me .I am kinda in the same boat the babysitter was in. Anyway it was a great story to get the juices flowing.

I am wanting a mistress relationship, but am in a very straight somewhat vanilla"marriage" this made me so very hot though...

I have just reread this entry, as good to read as the first time. Have read all seven chapters, eagerly await chapter eight.

I started with your Catching Mommy series and now that I'm here I really like this story as well. Apparently I enjoy lesbian domme stories. Who knew? Either way, keep up the amazing work!

I cant stop my cock from getting harder and harder!!!!!!!!

As I was reading this story it seems to me that this could actually happen because it was close to what happened to me. Jenny was seduced by a older women and I was seduced by a lesbian cheerleader in my school. It made me feel like I wasn't the only one that had been seduced by a lesbian. A lot of what happened to Jenny was what had happened to me. It was so real reading this story except for how Jenny lost her virginity. In the story it seems like it didn't hurt her. I my real life seduction it was the most painful thing that has ever happened to me. I guess that is the difference between real life and fiction. Thanks for letting me remember. As always. B.C

I wish someone would've seduced me when I was a babysitter, really enjoyed the story!

Gosh I love this series!!! I am your biggest fan! I've read everything that you have posted on literatica and I am obsessed with your stories!

If I wasn't in a pubic place I would be choking my smurf right now!

By the time I got to the second page, I was planning to beg for a sequel.

However, after finishing the third page, I looked for a sequel to find several more parts!!!!!

HELL YES!!!!

So nasty, so sexy, so good!!!! I'm on my way to read the second story in the series. All your stories make me soooo wet!!!!

I LOVE READING YOUR STORIES CUZ AFTER I'VE FINISHED I JUST FEEL REALLY GOOD.!!! Thank you Sex Goddess.

No question you rule. On too the next chapter.

I am not usually into Lesbian stories but I am now. That story was fantastic and well told. THANK YOU.

I just want to say that reading this makes me curious about being with an older woman. My ex gf was always rough with me, and since she's gone I miss it.

I wonder what it would be like to be with an older woman, and have her in charge and control me......

I'm not sure what that makes me, but I keep wondering and dreaming about her spanking me, tying me with nylons, gently slapping me and even whispering names in my ear.

I just wish I could find an older experienced woman who could show me, teach me... Train me... Show me what I am, and where I belong.

Candy

WOW, Great story! makes me wish I were a teenage girl that could have that experience........

Absolutely amazing! I need to see more!

Another amazing story. Thank you xxxxx

You are a truly gifted author. I have read this story before and found it very good., however, since rewriting it, it is now amazing. Thanks so much for your heart felt renderings.

Loved it---I truly love lesbians. I really lke the sensuallty! :-)

A very good story. I'm currently trying to write a few myself based on my own experiences and fantasies. If they end up half as good as this one I would be very happy.

So, so nice and naughty. My favourite theme is incest (especially aunt/nephew) but anything with stockings is good and this is amazing. Must findmore

OMG! I had to put a towel down I squirted twice and my orgasm was amazing! Ooooh! I'd love to be dominated for a night! Only for a night though, I'm a feminist at heart but I think I'm bi-curious.... Well we shall see.

J x

I recently started reading stories on this site, looking for clues as to Format, length, and such. The idea was to eventually write my own stories. After discovering more than a couple, of gifted authors, like yourself, I'm finding it a bit intimidating. Not to mention that there is so much I want to read, there's no time to write. Great work, by the way. This is definitely a series I plan to finish.

Being a straight guy, this story has me turned on to the many wonders of lesbian/bi encounters. There's just something about women on women that is very Eriotic to me...(vs guys on guys). I just love envisioning women loving women, their sexiness and, especially attire..or in some cases, lack there of. Women's lingerie is so sexy, I can get off on that alone...

Thanks for producing a great hard on...and relief...

Ive always hated the sucking the strapon thing. Espescially getting a virgin to do it. But, I understand it prolly has to do with the whole bdsm thing, which i dont really get. Anyways good stuff

I can not wait to finish the series. This was such a turn on for me.

a Mistress MILF

I have become addicted to your stories. Love the fantasy you had her write inside the story. I have sent a follow request on your twitter account. I would love to see what you do there.

I've already read this chapter. Yet I seemed to not have commented on the opening of this extensive series. Well written and also well thought out. Very anxious to get onto chapter#2.

5🌟's and a 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 dozen roses.

Being a nylon lover myself I found this a great turn on, the only thing missing...she didn't get a spanking. The strap on to was a great turn on, if only more women used them, not only as lesbians but on more than willing males like myself! Brilliantly written.

A well thought out and sexily worded story. Enjoyed reading it.

Wow, fast moving and sexy. Great plot line

Grumpy

I would like to rob that cradle, too. Great story!

I led myself here through randomly falling upon one of your other stories and loved it. Super sexy. Can’t wait to read the rest of this series. The situation you’ve set up here is so hot and ripe for adventure.

I really enjoyed this story, especially how you pulled the shy girl next door out of her shell. You left the plot open to allow for more submissive training of Jenny and it shows that you are extremely gifted in writing these stories!! Maybe someday your illustrated stories will have your pictures in in them. Keep up the great stories!

B Davis

648davisb@gmail.comc

Excellent start: Jenny needs the full treatment including BDSM, humiliation, public fisting etc.

jerked off and shot my hot load to this

Gay again?

It's sad that we have a homophobe reader here. domination and submission isn't about gender roles, it's about submission and being dominated to push boundaries. There's thousands of people that never experience true sexual gratification because of sterotypical insecurities. There's nothing wrong with same gender sex. It's not everybody's cup of tea but that doesn't make it wrong. Besides these are just stories, they shouldn't affect you so deeply. Take it for what it's worth and if you don't like it, don't red it. Personally, I'm bi so I'm okay with pretty well everything. Some of these stories are really fucking good and some of them not so much. This one I give a B+

It flows so smoothly now. Each paragraph paving the way for the next making it natural and near inevitable. I only saw one place where I think you slipped up, and that may well have been because of by my incomplete command of English (not my native language).

love Villow

To have Megan turn Jenny into her personal Lesbian Submissive was excellent beyond belief,Jenny obviously loved submitting to Megan as her Mistress and would do anything to please her,and Megan clearly found happiness with Jenny to control her completely.

Megan being the Domme gets to dominate what Jenny does or says,and in turn they each are thrilled to be who and what they are so they can each give the other pleasure while being Domme and Sub.This story is EPIC in every way.

Fantastic story for a rainy Saturday afternoon! I very much enjoyed it and can’t wait to read more! Thank you and your editors for the the time and effort to put together a great story!

Hot story love my lips sucked

Describing an older lesbian woman seducing her pretty younger babysitter is an EXCELLENT story idea, especially when the older woman is more dominant and the younger girl naturally submissive! I really enjoyed reading this one!

love the ass eating

What an incredibly talented writer! Your female lead is perfect. Amazing fantasy. Thank you!

Hi, I am new here but already you are my fav author. Thank you for writing such delicious stories.

I can do w/o the Dom stuff, but still super tasty!

Wow! Thrilling story with great descriptions and it really got me horny. I`d love to watch both characters making out in reality rather than fantasy and being able to relieve myself as it was happening! Please write more stories like this.

Awesome.

Verry. Good. Skype. 561. Peter.lowe. / surrey / england /. Age. 65

It is what it is, lesbian sex is still the ultimate sexual pleasure ever for women. Hopefully all women can get that experience of fulfillment at least once in their lifetime.

Good submission story. Well done.

Tawny T

One of the better D/s stories on lit.

But, why no safe word?

Idiots read these stories like they are a handbook on how to domme. Do you really want to encourage unsafe dangerous practices by the loopy brigade?

Why no middle ground, accept what I say Jenny, or hit the road. Why no option to learn more, or to ask questions to gain understanding to make a more informed decision. This just highlights the insecurities of a domme coz they cannot stand to have their words questioned.

Its a bit late after Jenny has said yes, I will obey you in everything, to then turn around and tell her that you are going to share her with any number of strangers who can do whatever they like with her. OH, you object do you Jenny. Its too late, you have already said yes.

And personally I really struggle with the often written concept that states that I know what you want or need better than you do. That is the zenith of stupidity. No one truly knows another person, you just know what the other person chooses to reveal.