Bedding the Babysitter

Please continue it was incredibly hot

please, please

we want....

you to continue

great story

hope to see more of this story soon

Good Storyline!!

I hope you continue this storyline between the older woman and the babbysitter. I'd like to see what you do with the storyline and how the older woman shares her with her lesbian friends.

Great start

Very good narrative and build up of the seduction. I even liked the shout out to your own story, "The Complete Submission"! Please continue the series, perhaps with her seducing other young women. My only recommendation is that you spend more time on the actual sex between the two women. You're writing of this part of your stories is very good, so just provide a little more of it.

Great Storyline!!!

Keep going anxious to see how far the older woman will bring the babysitter!!!!

A fine start

Nice build up & seduction, plenty of possibilities for progression & further submissions.

More.......

Nice start to a great story. Would like to see more.

Bedding the Cheerleader

Now that you have the babysitter, use your computer skills to fulfill her dream about bedding the cheerleader.

lovely

My first ever comment on a story, it has all the hallmarks of a great series, it has started so slowly and well , lvely build up , i so want too read more of the mistress and her babysitter.

Great Please Continue

Great Story Please Continue

It's a hot story but how did she get what baby???

....you must be tough to be married to eh?

great story....what happens next?

get her pierced and tattoed or something like that....mark her as a slave.

Very Hot. Please Continue.

This is a very hot story, and I love your attention to detail: stockings, etc. Please continue telling the tale of how the younger woman is turned into a sex slave.

Pleeeease!

Please write more i need it so badly!

Interesting start

very good story so far. I look forward to the next chapter.

you must!

i thourly enjoyed it. want to find out what results red stockings get her . actually i was stroking my cock cause as i began to see wher your messining was going i began to get hard. just imanging you breaking in a new slave is exciting to me,..................butr pleaze i'd lovre to read moer of ur writings

I Eagerly Agree

I agree with all of the other comments. There is so many other chapters of this story that agr begging you to write them. I would like to add my wishes to theirs. Please write more.

Bedding the babysitter

Wow it was one of the best stories I have read on Lit. Gave it a 5 out of 5. You've been added to my favorites list and am looking forward to more of your stuff.

This is my first letter to a writer. Please keep up the weighting. I am SO into domination / submission between girls. Sometimes I think I'm a lesbian born into a man's body. I've never done either D or S in my sex life but heres to the future.

Expect more feedback as I read more. If your looking for ideas there is a series of comic books called "Housewives at Play" by a lady named Rebecca, that was really into lesbian D/S as well as the bondage stuff. I'd love to see you write stories like that.

The only suggestion I could ask is that you give a paragraph describing the characters in your story so us "visually dependent people" can better picture the characters of the story.

If you would like you can Email me at Lit or my personal Email that you can find on my account.

To sum it up, please keep up the great work

Your newest fan,
Don

P.S. Like the picture on your account too. You one sexy lady.

I liked this

one a lot. I hope ypou finsh it and continue to write more.

More please

Great story. I'd love to see what else Meg has in store for her toy. This is just the beginning.

Well done! But...

I am a 17 year old guy and I really enjoy your stories. One concern I do have is that your stories are too predictable. Always stockings, almost always black women dominating white women and so on. I would also appreciate it if you proofread your stories before publishing. I notice a lot of simple mistakes and if you fix them your stories will be a lot better. Thanks. :)

hot

love your stories , i wish there were more writers like you , my favorites are of sexy black women dominating white women or young black women dominating older white women im one of your biggest fans

So Hot

I love everything you've written. The bedding the babysitter series needs some new chapters!

Cum, cum, cum is what you make me do!

Ok lemme just say im reading these "baby sitter" stories and omg there amazing! I just keep cumming and cumming... Im 13 and imma guy... I love erotica suprisingly its better than porn... Well i hope you enjoy my comment cause i love it and i hope you continue to make more stories!!!

I love this story

this reminded me of my friend Candy she loves nylons too (: itold heer about it. (:

me & Jayne

This story reminds me of my friend Jayne. I imagine myself as the schoolgirl and Jayne as the lesbian. She told me about the story and to go and read it. I really like imagining Jayne doing all these things to me. So naughty.

She's right I really do like nylons, stockings, pantyhose and stuff like that. I like how they feel on my skin, so tight n silky. I think she likes when I wear them too...

Thanks Jayne for opening me up to new possibilities.

XXOO
Candy

Please let her mother notice me.

OMG what you've done to me now. I'm 17 and going to be a senior next month in a high school class of 136 students. I've been active in sports but have led a sheltered life and have noticed some of my classmates in the shower, and there is one girl there that I'd love to get to know better, but don't think there is a chance, but her mother is a beautiful woman and I have babysat for her on two occasions and now after reading your story, would love to have her make love to me like you did here. How do I get her to know that?

Mmmmmmm good

Omg dis story got me wet I played wit my clit at the thought of being dominanted by an older women please finish it off

Your friend's mom

To the other person who posted about noticing girls at school and wanting their friend's mom.

I'd recommend your wear some nice clothes, try to get her to notice you. Maybe ask her some questions... like about sex and stuff, get her to talk to you in private... try and stand close to her, maybe rub your body against her a little...

Jayne has been getting me to try new things with her, and even though I don't know that much yet.. I think that stuff would be a good start for you.

Thanks again Jayne for all you do to me!!! I love how you are making me spread open for you, even if it is a little bit at a time. Thanks for being so patient with me.

Sincerely,

Candy


XXOO to Jayne

I KNOW ITS MUCH MORE THEN A ONE TIMER

OK. IN ALL THE BABY SITTER STORIES YOU NEVER DEVELOPED THE FACT THAT SHE WAS THE CHEER LEADERS SLUT. I THINK A STORY OF THE CHEER LEADERS USING HER AND EACH OTHER WOULD BE A GREAT SEXY STORY. WOULD MAKE ME CUM MANY TIMES THINKING OF ALL THOSE 18 YEAR OLDS SUCKING AND FUCKING AND WHO WOULD COME IN ON IT BUT SOME OF THEIR MOTHERS WHO GET IN ON THE ACTION. HOW ABOUT THAT JENNY.
WALT

Nicely done!

I like it ... you tell a very good story ... From experience?

You Tease!

I'm glad that you already have written more parts to this or I'd be going nuts! LOL

Fantastic!

A great piece of writing. Had me cumming by page 2!. This is the first story of yours I have read, but I intend on reading all the rest.....quickly! I look forward to many more orgasms, courtesy of your outstanding work.

Damn

Made me wet

Lusting!

One of the most erotic stories I have ever read!

Jayne

Hi Jayne

It's candy

I don't have your contact info anymore

I really wanna chat with you


Xxoo

Candy

Great story...

I am looking forward to reading the next installment....

Great

Wow. Very exciting story as all your stories so far.

Really hot, good writing

Yes, really hot, good writing about sums it up. I'll just add that I thought the story of the relationship between the lesbian MILF and the unsure, submissive girl, who became her willing slave, was well crafted. Whether you are a dominant person or a submissive type, you could certainly identify with what was happening in this story.

This is my 2nd story by you. I guess I am hooked now.

You are great. My complaints are so few they are not worth mentioning. Please keep up the great story telling or we will come after you (smile).

I am putting you in my favorite authors list shortly.

Thanks

Another stunner!

It's not just about the sex, though as ever with your stories it's amazing, but I love the characters and look forward to getting to know more about them as I read more of this series.

Thank you,

Andy

story within the story

that was a great, interesting read. have yet to read many good lesbian erotic stories on here so thankyou for writing the best one ive read so far. liked the story within the story too cept it seemed more immaturely written if that makes sense but of course it was from jennys perspective so that makes it a clever comparison with how you have written from megans perspective. nice one ;)

OMG

Love this story. This story was definitely turning me on and my mistress is currently out of the country. I'm learning to be a sub which is something new to me but your story is like totally amazing. I hope I will be as eager as the babysitter.

great story

omg i love it!!!!! it got me so wet i cant wait to read the rest! Laura x

Hot

That's was a great story I'm horny now. I love seduction story's the best

So Hard Right Now

My cock has never been this hard in my life. So fucking amazing

Great!

The very first thing I read from you and - I'm a fan.
You certainly can write a story , develop a plot, you have real-live persons and
excellent dialogues. Really wonderful.

Great Story

This was a really great story , sure wish I could find a mistress close to me .I am kinda in the same boat the babysitter was in. Anyway it was a great story to get the juices flowing.

more please

I am wanting a mistress relationship, but am in a very straight somewhat vanilla"marriage" this made me so very hot though...

Again

I have just reread this entry, as good to read as the first time. Have read all seven chapters, eagerly await chapter eight.