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McLain's Misfits Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/19/10

Sounds like this will be an exciting story!


PLEASE continue the DOC series!!!!

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by gunnycdc09/19/10

chapter length

i love your stories kingkey, but i feel you would do better if your chapters were longer, one page and you just get into it, then you have to wait for the next one page chapter. would you please make your chapters longer, 2 or 3 pages at a minimum.

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by kingkey09/20/10

Doc

I'm going to add to my other stories. Doc is just slow but I'm still working on it.

Kingkey

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by Anonymous02/01/11

Technical Quibble

Hydrogen is used in fusion reactors, not fission reactors.

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by Anonymous09/12/14

Great story

Keep writing .

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