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McLain's Misfits Ch. 03

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by happyjack92109/24/10

loved it!

I wished your chapters were much larger

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by Anonymous09/24/10

great work

More great work just wish there was more of it thank you for sharing.

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by Anonymous09/24/10

what about the doc

this is a good story and i'm getting in to it, longer chapters would be nice but what about your other story 'doc' are you done with it or are you just taking a brake with it.

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