I so do like a little laughter with my romance. Great chapter and refresher on the Tanner family and friends.
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Anonymous09/20/10
great writing
there are a few people on Lit who can write and make reading a joy. You are one
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Anonymous09/20/10
Brilliant, as always!
I don't think there was a wasted word in the entire chapter! The characters just jump off the screen! Outstanding writing, and I am glad you are at it again!!!
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Anonymous09/20/10
one of the best writer.....................no no no no no best writer ................................addicted to ur writing........................................tha nks for letting me read your awesome work.
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Anonymous09/20/10
Have been checking every day to see if you'd updated...and finally you have! This is a great way to start my morning; Flick is such a likable character. I loved her gushing over the bike and Matt's jealousy...I really hope you update soon!
Why are all the gals in romance stories so insecure? Makes it easier for them to become happier as the story goes along, but it also makes them unreal. Lots of fun though!
what a sweet update, if in that one moment Matt didn't look jealous ;-)
and all the gang together again, gotta love those sundays when they all come together.
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Anonymous09/20/10
I was so excited to see the next chapter I positively giggled out loud! And it did not disappoint. But what is up with Matt? It appeared that he really did not wish to bring Flick to the wedding? And then he was cold because she was enjoying being flirted with? ...boys. No course ever ran smooth... the bumps keep it interesting. Please keep it up, thank you!- SGP
Its a great posting though like you have said, its short. I do feel the characters in your stories are real, the way they are reacting because of their backgrounds. Cant wait for the next post.
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Anonymous09/20/10
love it love it love it!
you never dissapoint. If i might make a suggestion tho, it would be fun to get matt's take on the events too. I cant help thinking that his thoughts might make all us romantics chuckle ;-) keep up the great work
I love the dynamic of the whole Tanner group getting together for a Sunday afternoon, no agenda, no time constraints, just good company and good conversation. I wish my family had more opportunities to spend time together like that. Firstkiss, your stories are an inspiration in so many ways!
me thinks matt needs a good kick int the arse and should get that very same arse in gear, maybe the big brother can do his thing
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Anonymous09/21/10
Yours
is a talent that stands alone, only matched by three or four others on this site. Your characterizations are so strong and filled with such human warmth that we feel we know them intimately in just a few paragraphs.
D
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Anonymous09/21/10
huge problem with your story!
Okay, so I've read everything you've been kind enough to post on literotica and I've enjoyed it all immensely. But I have to say I have a Huge problem with your story... you make the story so good that I want to keep reading and finish each series!
I can't wait to see what happens next with Felicity and Matt. Thanks again for sharing!
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Anonymous09/21/10
AMAZING
Please please please dont make us wait another week
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Anonymous09/22/10
Crybaby
- that's me. First it was, "Ooooh, second chapter!", then "What the hell's the matter with you, Matt - waaah, no, it's over!" Ergo, I'm a crybaby for seconding whoever commented, "Please don't make us wait another week!" Poor Felicity... if Matt makes her feel guilty again, I will want to kick him in the sins, hard. Jeez, guys...
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Anonymous09/22/10
Please hurry
I have read all of the "Not My Type" And I LOVE THEM!!!! I was so happy when I saw the chapters for Felicity. Now the only thing I can ask is PLEASE dont make us wait!!
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Anonymous09/25/10
More, more, more!
pretty please!
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Anonymous09/28/10
Chapter 3? Please?
Love the new story and am on here several times a day to check for an update!
English
Oh soooo
Nice progress with the story line, the development was so good the length was easily forgiven! Muah! You're great!
sweet and funny
I so do like a little laughter with my romance. Great chapter and refresher on the Tanner family and friends.
great writing
there are a few people on Lit who can write and make reading a joy. You are one
Brilliant, as always!
I don't think there was a wasted word in the entire chapter! The characters just jump off the screen! Outstanding writing, and I am glad you are at it again!!!
one of the best writer.....................no no no no no best writer ................................addicted to ur writing........................................tha nks for letting me read your awesome work.
Have been checking every day to see if you'd updated...and finally you have! This is a great way to start my morning; Flick is such a likable character. I loved her gushing over the bike and Matt's jealousy...I really hope you update soon!
Delightful little story
Why are all the gals in romance stories so insecure? Makes it easier for them to become happier as the story goes along, but it also makes them unreal. Lots of fun though!
what a sweet update, if in that one moment Matt didn't look jealous ;-)
and all the gang together again, gotta love those sundays when they all come together.
I was so excited to see the next chapter I positively giggled out loud! And it did not disappoint. But what is up with Matt? It appeared that he really did not wish to bring Flick to the wedding? And then he was cold because she was enjoying being flirted with? ...boys. No course ever ran smooth... the bumps keep it interesting. Please keep it up, thank you!- SGP
Great posting
Its a great posting though like you have said, its short. I do feel the characters in your stories are real, the way they are reacting because of their backgrounds. Cant wait for the next post.
love it love it love it!
you never dissapoint. If i might make a suggestion tho, it would be fun to get matt's take on the events too. I cant help thinking that his thoughts might make all us romantics chuckle ;-) keep up the great work
Sundays
I love the dynamic of the whole Tanner group getting together for a Sunday afternoon, no agenda, no time constraints, just good company and good conversation. I wish my family had more opportunities to spend time together like that. Firstkiss, your stories are an inspiration in so many ways!
your usual greatness
me thinks matt needs a good kick int the arse and should get that very same arse in gear, maybe the big brother can do his thing
Yours
is a talent that stands alone, only matched by three or four others on this site. Your characterizations are so strong and filled with such human warmth that we feel we know them intimately in just a few paragraphs.
D
huge problem with your story!
Okay, so I've read everything you've been kind enough to post on literotica and I've enjoyed it all immensely. But I have to say I have a Huge problem with your story... you make the story so good that I want to keep reading and finish each series!
I can't wait to see what happens next with Felicity and Matt. Thanks again for sharing!
AMAZING
Please please please dont make us wait another week
Crybaby
- that's me. First it was, "Ooooh, second chapter!", then "What the hell's the matter with you, Matt - waaah, no, it's over!" Ergo, I'm a crybaby for seconding whoever commented, "Please don't make us wait another week!" Poor Felicity... if Matt makes her feel guilty again, I will want to kick him in the sins, hard. Jeez, guys...
Please hurry
I have read all of the "Not My Type" And I LOVE THEM!!!! I was so happy when I saw the chapters for Felicity. Now the only thing I can ask is PLEASE dont make us wait!!
More, more, more!
pretty please!
Chapter 3? Please?
Love the new story and am on here several times a day to check for an update!
Lovely
Can't wait to read more. Wonderful!
GOD! You're the QUEEN!!!!!
EVERY SINGLE TIME!
Awesome!! Love all your stories :-)
Lol, this story is so cute.
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