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Pete Comes Out

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/20/10

Read and rewrite!!

Lacks decent punctuation and sentence structure. The readers shouldn't have to reconstruct as they read. Get an editor!!!

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by Anonymous09/20/10

Forget these punctuation nerds

The story was good and small punctuations errors didn't detract from that. Ignore these people who just want to sound smart - when obvioulsy they are not!

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by Anonymous09/20/10

Good Write!

You have a really natural style. It didn't feel forced or artificial. Very comfortable and visual to read. Thanks for the story!

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