Best Laid Plans

No Shit -

I love that one - it was fucking priceless -

A true Master Card moment -

You gotta know there will be shit flying at the attorney's office but tough shit - it is unlikely anyone will be caught and the husband wins it all - no one will believe the bitch did not plan it all or the new guy either way even the court will be pissed.

very, very clever

Short and sweet and to the point....of the dagger of vengeance!

Yah just gotta love good act of hate,

Excellent

That's what you do to a cheating cunt wife and a selfish ungrateful family. DUMP 'EM.

Ha

My honor

Thank you DD who saves the honor of India alone!

Loved the idea but..

Where is the follow up? I want them destroyed without mercy.

Damn, this had an excellent start, but...

Where's the rest of it. Yes, it is a good flash story but how much better could it have been? I guess we'll never know. Still...as I said, it was a great flash story so it still get's 5*s from me.

Yet another writer that CAN'T finish what they start!

most all 2/3 page tales only worth 3 stars

so I do hereby before the queen and subjects give 3 stars

You get a 2 from me.......

ONLY BECAUSE YOU DIDN'T FINISHTHEDAMNSTORY!

Wanted More!

A real excellent start of a story...BUT...I wanted MORE. Now I know how finishthedamnstory feels when you read a good story and it just stops.

****

These pauses in your tales betwee 2nd and 3rd gear are getting tiresome.

Well you're not divorced yet.

And after the lovers talk, they'll figure out you were responsible for the papers. And then the REAL fight begins, And she gets half of everything. Guess what? You may have won the first skirmish but boy are you about to get screwed in the divorce!

This could have been a great story,

but there was so much more to tell and evidently you're just lazy and only told a small part of the story. Even a flash story deserves somewhat of an end. It could have been an easy 5*s. As it is, 2 is the best I can do.

LAZY !!!

without reading any of the other comments I would like to say there could have been a lot more said within this story. But you, like so many other wanna-be authors on this site, either don't have a way to enhance their stories just leave it like this one. This could have been good enough to earn 5 star rating. But due to you ( for whatever reason ) decided to leave it like it is. I wont even give it 3. A 11/2 to a 2 is all its worth. FINISH THE DAMN STORY either by adding another chapter or two and maybe it will get the 5 stars that it could or would get ( from me anyway ). Because from reading this story it appears that you have a talent for writing. You were doing good with this. so please add another chapter and basically finish this one.

IF ONLY FOR THE NAIVE

if this scenario could happen more than once in a blue moon. TK U MLJ LV NV

5

great story

Damn, this actually has all the elements it needs to be a great story...

and it is! So short yet so fully packed. It got 5 well deserved stars from me but I can't help wishing there was a lot more.

it is funny how some people cut on writers here about their postings.
amazingly they do not have enough imagination to write their own, but they are qualified to bitch about someone else's work. does anyone else have any thoughts on that?

This was a laid plan for a story, but really it was just a scene.

Finish the fucking thing!!

Good, 5* story

It said what needed to be said.

Well done.

Hahaha!

5* for a short with a fun twist!

SHORT, SWEET & *****