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Both Romantic and Erotic!
This is a marvelous piece of work; when you call your characters "lovers" it is more than just a cliche; these two really are in love. They seemed quite natural together, and I as the reader found myself quite fond of the both of them. That made the story all the more enjoyable.
You Practice What You Preach
Colleen, I have read your advice about writing lesbian scenes. You follow your own advice and do it with aplomb. We learn to care about both the characters, they take their time, so many lovely sensations. Added to that, a good sense of humor rounds out the bouquet. Bravisimo!
What A Riot
Very creative idea and I loved all of poor Dawn's reactions. She is a trip. Sensuous and also highly entertaining with the little battle they waged between them. Thanks for the smiles and great story
So beutifull
I think this is one of your best stories,I cum twice just reading it without touching my pussy.Keep up the good work.
With lots of luv Jenny Cook
Hehe.
Made me smile.
Couldn't stop
Your characters are so easy to love that I couldn't stop reading.
How wonderful that a butch becomes femme, even for a night. May you write more like this.
Nicely Done!
You have a smooth, admirable style. Well textured and also carefully edited for brevity. Nicely done!
Awesome
You are an amazing writer. Best butch femme I've read thus far.
Great story.
I take it you are commenting on this: http://www.walkamileinhershoes.org/ And how it is relevant, even in a lesbian context.
regards VvV
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