A Penny for Your Thoughts Ch. 05

ok then... laterz...

by skipping the night of passion/lust/love, you have lost me as a reader for this "series". Sorry, but you dont/cant just build up and then totally drop an all night long "fuck" fest between 2 seemingly perfect compatible people, unless you want to lose readers, which is what you did (for me at least)... Anon1856

WOW

There was a day back in 1975, When I ate peyote with seven white mountain Apache indians at their reservation in Arizona. All eight of us each knew what the other was thinking- no secrets, It was one helluva eye opeening trip. Anyway, I love this story not least because I know what's possible. RI

A really busy chapter

A lot went on in this chapter including plenty of erotic sex.
It's always nice to be entertained with an interesting storyline along with being aroused by explicit sex.

Thanks.

AWESOME

You have got to write this book. I love stories with actual character development, and written well. There are not enough novel length stories for those who like erotic literature rather than just stroke stories.

I was spellbound, an I'm hoping you'll get to the rest of this story soon!

Great storytelling

Been reading your stories for about three or four years.(since finding Literotica)This is one of your best and I sincerely hope CH. 5 is just the beginning!

Waiting for chapter 6. Nice story.

plans for more?

love the stories, have plans for any more? i would love to see an antagonist thrown into the mix for Brian to contend with.

A penny for your thoughts

Fantastic nice slow build up , very good writing you can be proud of this one

Indeed

will there be more?
Middle John 16

More

More please. Really enjoyed it

Sorry

Stranger In A Strange Land. Robert did this to perfection. You are doing a very good job at it, and I hope you continue. Have really enjoyed this!

More please!!!

I hope that this story will continue!

Good story

Really enjoyed the entire story, the only thing I'd change is the final statement "to be continued", about all I can can see for another chapter is a lesson better taught by the local business school on start-ups. Of course that does not rule out a sequel, but it would need to be more than just another chapter.

too bad...

this has become another abandoned storyline...it has such promise...

Continuation?

I don't know what Many Feathers personal situation is, but to abandon a story for five years is a betrayal to the readers. He should delete the first five chapters until he is ready/able to finish the story.

It happens to the best

I, for one, hate it when a author abandons a series or a story. I've written to the author and I never heard back from the author. I like the authors work but it's incomplete. Where is the rest of the other parts to the stories?

Great fun

Carry on

Health Issues

From reading Many Feathers bio, it looks like he has had a poor health hit. Considering the significant level of contributions to this site, my thoughts would be to let him rest. Hopefully, and regardless of any future contributions, I just hope his health improves.

where is the rest of this story?