by Agnol
I enjoyed reading this story & I hope you will continue with it.
Tender, more than a story. Wanton sister needs brother she can trust
three years and no chapter two what a waste of time EITHER DELETE OR FINISH BUT DON'T LEAVE IT LIKE THIS LOSER. half a story is worse than no story at all and this is much less than half. no background and no character development and no end all equal a waste of time. this never should have been posted until you were ready to finish it PROPERLY.
" the humid flesh of his cock"????? Her "cunny"????? Wow. I'm speechless. How do you do it. Are you from another planet?
This could've developed into a good story but this author evidently decided to cut it short. What a waste. The story was just enough for most readers to assume the story would develop more. Well, that sure as hell didn't happen. I don't understand writers that writes something that should be developed more but don't seem to understand that. It's a shame the author failed to recognize he had something that should have been a great story but didn't on account of a failure to realize what he had. Again, what a waste.
The old fart
Would have given more stars if the story would have continued. Need more to this one.