Just the Six of Us Ch. 08

WOW

This was the best chapter so far, I loved how beautiful and hot the love making was while having Emma watching and playing with herself! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I got to say i love your story....there aren't many that can give you a boner and laugh at the same time. the inner voice thing makes me laugh like crazy. keep up the good work

beautifully written

I love the story! Slowly building , erotic tension, characters who aren't one dimensional. Please write more! I am anxiously waiting for the other sisters to become more involved. Sooo HOT!

Submitting

It's going to take a few days for the next chapter, so bear with me! I'll submit it today after a final proofread. Chapters 10 and 11 are done and edited, I just need to put the finishing touches on them.

Thank you for all the wonderful feedback.

Great series!

One of his sisters finally got him. I think it's just a matter of time before ALL his sisters get him.
This is a great series. I has the right mix of humor and sexuality. Keep up the great work.

BEST CHAPTER YET!

Jerry in Washington State, USA - There is so much I enjoyed about this chapter! I loved the surprised of Danni being the one that takes Mike's cherry - I thought for sure that Sarah would be first, even before the start of the trip. The scene with Danni and Mike was extra special - I loved that it was a first for Danni also, experiencing real love making. Emma watching and getting off herself made this a very hot scene, indeed! I loved the putdown of the guys on the boat and the build up of Mike at the same time. I feel that scene helped set the stage for Danni and Mike's lovemaking later. I especially enjoy how you are writing Mike's character so that he is actually earning his sisters' love and lust - not just being lucky. His special surprises for each sister on the trip is an example. Sorry it is going to be an extra day or two before the next chapter, but I knew the every day posting wasn't going to last forever!

What a great series!!

This is a tremendous series!. Every chapter keeps getting better and better. When I check the new stories every day I look for yours first.

Well done!

This story keeps getting better and better :)

Lucky man

I am falling in love with Emma, Sarah and Danni and Beth to. One man and four perfect women.

AWESOME

Excellent story. Can't wait for the next installment

Best one yet!

I liked that Beth finally got some action in there as well. Was wondering if she'd ever get her opportunity to shine! Not very realistic in taking danni's virginity though. Obviously he would have known before she told him....

Making Love, not virginity!

To that dude that commented on her virginity, it was stated earlier that she used to sleep around, so she hasn't had anything near virginity for some time now ^.^

but this is the first time LOVE was involved! So it's her first time...making love. Tadah!

That sure gets the pulse racing

Incredibly HOT chapter

magnificunt

this series is soooo erotic....hope it keeps on cumming
Rod from melbourne

Since now ...

I've been reading from Ch 1 at once. And I loved every single word.
You have absolutely now idea how amazing this stuff ist compared the the category in german lit.
Even the best ones over there (which are few I can tell you) don't come close to the magic of your story.

You should feel very proud of this.
Thank you!

i ve been reading from 1st chapter at length. though i have to get up in the morning early i just cant resist reading further!!!! i have even lost the the count of how many times i ve masturbated since evening..

Very erotic...

Very erotic and nice story line with a nice build up of the sex...
I cant stop masturbating to this...

Great

You know stingrays are about the most dangerous fish there is right? Do people really swim with them? if so they are braver than I.

Great Whites

Actually I think Great Whites and Tiger sharks are both species of fish that are a bit more dangerous

Meh, I mean... not really. They're both relatively passive (well, tigers at least. Great Sharks just don't get anywhere near people).

But that's true of stingrays as well. They're only dangerous if you step on them. Plus most "formal" swimming locations just remove the spine anyway.

Wow

Dear God, that was beautiful...

Not sure what else to say. Just... wow.

Guys listen!

If any guy ever wants to know what it means to be romantic, here is the users manual! These stories are incredible!

Romance

This storie is seems so real it feels as though u didn't make it up I can't wait to read more BRAVO!!

figured his first would be w/ his twin and they'd lose theirs together

Wonderful...

though I wished his first time would had been with Emma.

Best chapter yet

All I can say is WOW

wow....

I hoped his forst time was with Emma, it was nice that he was able to make love to Danni.

Team Danni

Awesome. That was the coolest thing I could've imagined would happen. After Sarah had the first 'encounter' with Mike, I was really worried that she would be his first one. Thank god it was Danni. That's what started the whole story, "Oh, Danni" it was the best possible outcome. I would've understood if it was Emma, but I am glad it's Danni. They are obviously the best suited. It should be called "The Mike, Emma and Danni show"

aw rats

to be honest i was hoping emma would get him first thinking danni would catch them and get jealous

Little Disappointed

I'm reading this series lovingly. Only this chapter felt a bit makeshift - especially the part where Mike & Emma had it on. But who cares, when it's so wonderful that it's taking my breath away...

I think that what happens between Emmie abed Mike could have been a little bit more gradual, great installment though

Quite simply,

BEAUTIFUL!

A really good chapter, with Mike actually behaving like a real guy would, for a change! I just don't get him dodging off on Sarah constantly, it makes no sense even reading it a second or third time (been a while). They could have easily made time, but Mike works so hard at being a douche, lol.

....and the jet ski incident was a little weird... I cant picture how she is reaching around behind herself and sliding her ass on top of his dick. No way without her taking it out of his swim trunks or pulling it out through the leg sleeve, even then, unless he has one of those funky dicks, when you're hard it points straight up and bending it horizontal is somewhat painful!
....then there was her thought about fucking him, thinking that there was no way,even if she weren't a virgin. ...that comment would lead you to believe her hymen was intact, but elsewhere she is shoving three or four fingers in her pussy so you know it sure as hell isnt there anymore! Lol.
....yeah, piddly inconsistencies, but fun to spot them anyway!
....and after all the putting off of Sarah, he doesn't bat a fucking eye at fucking Danni with his twin not ten feet away in the same room! Wtf?! If I was Sarah, I'd castrate the fucker when I found out he'd fucked Danni before he fucked me!! Lol.

Sorry it wan't Emma.

Mike and his twin should have fucked first. I'm disappointed.

I wish

I wish I had virgin sisters to fuck. I will be following this series very closely

Surprised

I thought either Sarah or Emma would be first good job shaking things up. Beth will be last though!

I don't remember this

Can't say that I recall reading this segment when I first read it years ago,
The voice in head was much funnier
Dialogue was better
The chemistry between Mike and em is missing

that was incredible. and thank you for including the Caymans in your story. my favorite place of the planet