All Comments on 'Hot Tub Seduction'

This story was starting out to be WAY TOO hot, to end with the act summed up in a mere paragraph. The build up was excellent but the ending seemed like the author suffered a little premature ejaculation while writing. Keep trying and take your time.

Haha thanks, yeah I've always thought that was a problem with my stories, just gotta keep working on that aspect.

I liked the slow, sexy build-up, but had no problem with the quick ending. Sure, you could spin out several more sessions, but this got the point across. Good job!