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by HungExecutive09/23/10

Potential LOST!

This story was starting out to be WAY TOO hot, to end with the act summed up in a mere paragraph. The build up was excellent but the ending seemed like the author suffered a little premature ejaculation while writing. Keep trying and take your time.

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by felok2209/24/10

Haha thanks, yeah I've always thought that was a problem with my stories, just gotta keep working on that aspect.

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by Carnevil909/24/10

I liked it

I liked the slow, sexy build-up, but had no problem with the quick ending. Sure, you could spin out several more sessions, but this got the point across. Good job!

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