This was a very nice story but I got the feeling that the ending was a bit rushed you did a very good job setting the scene and then rushed to end the story. It would be nice to see what happens with Richie and what other lives the Fantasy Island Business has changed.
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Anonymous09/24/10
enjoyable story to read
I like how you built up the story but agreed how you sped to end it.
Please continue and let us know how the rest of the people end their stay or what happens when they return back home to their new real lives.
Another very interesting approach to problem solving
As long as both sides believe their guilt is enough to excuse the others actions it works.
As soon as one side realizes that what they did was wrong but not deliberate and that the other one betrayed them knowingly - it is likely to fall apart.
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Very nice!
I really like how (almost) everyone got what they wanted. I would like to know what happened to Richie (how he changed, if at all.)
Very nice story.
Very Nice
This was a very nice story but I got the feeling that the ending was a bit rushed you did a very good job setting the scene and then rushed to end the story. It would be nice to see what happens with Richie and what other lives the Fantasy Island Business has changed.
enjoyable story to read
I like how you built up the story but agreed how you sped to end it.
Please continue and let us know how the rest of the people end their stay or what happens when they return back home to their new real lives.
Thank you for writing the story for us ot enjoy
Another very interesting approach to problem solving
As long as both sides believe their guilt is enough to excuse the others actions it works.
As soon as one side realizes that what they did was wrong but not deliberate and that the other one betrayed them knowingly - it is likely to fall apart.
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