by DarkerSeth
It was a little ridiculous. I didn't see the point of it. It was really just gross. I would never discourage someone from trying again. I just would wonder, what you were going for with this? I didn't understand her putting her through his body? Why did he do it? And the ridiculousness of him putting her on her cock and her flying around like a puppet ...it's kinda funny as a visual but... I wish you luck on your next story.
I agree with the above. There was no substance to this, no explanation. Just some random fetish.
It's hilarious! I mean let's get real about all these stories where dragons and humans fuck: size-wise, not possible. Yes I know this is fantasy fiction but given the size difference of a dragon and a human, this story is a helluva lot more realistic (pun intended).
Rock on DarkerSeth!