Great story. I really liked it. Interesting way to explain the creation of vamps. I think he could have been a little more understanding about the people trying to kill him, afterall how could they differentiate between him and other vamps he taught them to kill? I enjoyed the story. will you continue it ? thanks
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Anonymous09/27/10
goddamned arrogant canadian sap sucking mongrels
your pathetic country is filled with fucktards like this.
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Great story. I really liked it. Interesting way to explain the creation of vamps. I think he could have been a little more understanding about the people trying to kill him, afterall how could they differentiate between him and other vamps he taught them to kill? I enjoyed the story. will you continue it ? thanks
goddamned arrogant canadian sap sucking mongrels
your pathetic country is filled with fucktards like this.
canaDUH sucks
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