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by Esperanza_Hidalgo09/22/10

nice

and a perfect title

would love to see more of your work posted.

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by fridayam09/22/10

Espie's right

you should post more here. This is dark and turbid--I love "varicose". And the end is chilling.

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by geronimo_appleby09/22/10

i'm seeing ...

lollards and the tyburn tree. damn poets and their ability to use minimum wordage to maximum effect.

... damn them poets! ;)

excellent verse, chippers. xx

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by UnderYourSpell09/22/10

fabulous

I've always loved this one of yours and I am so glad more people will have the joy of reading it

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by twelveoone02/22/11

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hi, chipper, stares at legs, oh seas did you say, do I have to serious?
I liked it.-100

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