All Comments on 'Wife's Busy Night at Work'

DWhuedogg, poopchootkaboose, zed0 the ped0, all WBC come out and show your true cuck

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married to a gay wimp. Save your time and do not read this story. Where are all the real story writers and I do not mean ss06

After what you wrote it should say bigandphysical and an idiot.

and he still wants to be a cucky wimp. TK U MLJ LV NV

Puke.

Put a warning on this shit, and change your name to bigandwimpy.

Another WACC writer, I can see ifr the two of you decided to be slut together but she a slut and you a cuckold creampie lover. But at least you can write. 3*

DWhuedogg and zed0 the ped0 answered the first call for cucks, need poopchootkaboose and any other WBC out there

he orders his sushi 'well done'

and who the fuck was looking after your kid when you left to follow her around? Then you rape her? ARE you a fucking retard?

No wait, that would be an insult to the mentally challenged.

how many diseases are you really in the market for and she is taking this stuff bareback. Damn shoot her and keep her from dying with AIDS

That this shit doesn't even deserve 1 star please do not populate Lit with anymore of your Bullshit

I have to agree with the rest.

This has to be one of the worst stories I have ever read in this venue.

Total absolute perverted bullshit!

Dude stick to the Fetish section. Your Going to be crucified in the LW section with good cause. Poor WACC Wimp Ass Castrated Cuckold

A feminized dildo carrier his testosterone leaked out when he pissed . I have seen this more in the users of coke and marijuana. I guess that's why it is called dope.

still a cockold.

My wife the amateur pornstar, gimme those crust sloppy seconds... Wait!! No, that was the movie we watched, not what any resemblance of life, fictional or not looks like. Doesn't play out well as a story when nothing is explained. 7 billion people on the rock , so what are the chances these two are like the handful of couples you find on hotwife sites?? Slim and none.

Author finish this story and let him be a man..this bitch is cheating and this story ended poorly.seeing your wife fucking another he gets hot and fucks her and then slaps her. so how does this end..is he a wimp or a man.

Give it up. Lousy plot, lousy writing. Downright stupid.

Just another stupid story trying to ake husbands look wimpy and stupid. He should have btoken the door down ant at least beat the shit out of both of them and told the slut never ever to ciome home.

"DWhuedogg is so stupid he orders his sushi 'well done'"

"calling all cucks DWhuedogg, poopchootkaboose, zed0 the ped0, all WBC come out and show your true cuck"

"calling more cucks DWhuedogg and zed0 the ped0 answered the first call for cucks, need poopchootkaboose and any other WBC out there"

The dwarf pin sized cuck ugly fat troll that writes comments like the above is the TRUE CUCK.

Good solid story.......entertainment.....

Not sure what the other commenters problem is . . . Maybe they are just jealous !!

To paraphrase the Bard "it is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing."

Why does he stomp his feet, billow out his chest and carry on when at the end he does not care and in fact encourages her to do it even more. No logic here. He has wasted time effort and mental anguish foe no reason. He likes being a WACC with a gutter slut for a wife, fine, he's got it. End of story in one paragraph.

Maybe, just maybe, they have a different opinion. Believe it or not, that is a allowed, despite what you think, asshole.

despite what all the insecure juvenile whiners have to say.... It is the "loving wives" section; what did they expect?

...that he was going to do something about his cheating wife? You portrayed her as a sneak, a liar, a cheat and a potential slut and then - he sees her with a short scrawny loser type abd he is sure something isn't right, he is sure she isn't faithful (some happy 3 years and with a child).

You wrote in the right category but you duped your readers into believing one direction of a man who has lost his wife's fidelity and switched him to a wuss/wimp/cuck...you somewhat describe him as an intelligent, confident and monogamous male and then you throw him into submission.

You write reasonably well but - insulting your readers will cause your followers to drop off - me for one!

Thanks anyway.

What kind of a man gets off wathcing another person fuck his wife? I'll tell you, a sick one. A wife that fucks another person outside of the marriage is not a loving wife. She is a common whore. Other than that, good writing.

Set up very well. I like that he was a closet cuckold the entire time.

@RVWS: If that's how a story like this hits you, then what the Hell are you doing on a site like this? I fantasize about this kind of thing DAILY, and have for my entire 38 married years. It's the one thing that never fails to arouse. My biggest regret is that I've never been able to convince her to "take the plunge" ( :) ) Find another site to rant at, willya?

You're a sick fuck. Did you ever consider that if your wife did what you want, it could be habit forming. Maybe after that, she could very well get rid of your perverted ass.

You and some of your commentators agree on this: She's a fucking whore.

Even so, most times we still love our wives, want our wives, need our wives and will forgive them almost anything. It is amazing how much they give us.

I laugh at all the neg comments from guys whining about "cucks and wimps", "sluts and AIDS"...when they were just sitting there, cock in hand, thinking about the story and hoping for a piece of ass (male or female) bcuz they couldn't get it for real. Losers trying to make up for their lack of balls and writing ability.

To the writer: Not bad. I dig the Cuck/creampie angle. Keep it up. You get better with practice. Thanks for the busted nut.

You're one weird fuck. You should laugh because you're talking about yourself. To even make such a comment tells a lot about your make up. People like you are laughable.

My wife is a little like yours. She fucks her schooldays first boyfriend and thinks I don't know it. Watched them do it at a park in his car. When she got home I fucked her and took her ass. She hates that but don't think she could complain seeing where she had been that day! Good to see others with similar situations.

and hes stuck with it. TK U MLJ LV NV

Divorce her ass.

that's not a marriage its a joke

he should have kicked her out of the house she is a worthless slut and if he fucked her after hopefully he gets a disease.

stupid ass people

The husband went from angry about his wife cheating to being a cuck and fucking her with another man's load in her. Next he'll lick it. Fucking cuck.

What a whore and now has a wimp

great start, but, once discovered she was cheating? a 6ft former weight lifter, vs a 5'6" punk, unbelievable and the ending made sure of it. go back to reality and write as it would happen no more fantasies please

A guy built like the husband compared to the other guy and this suppose to be big guy gets the hots from his wife fucking another guy come on jerk. any real man would have either broke the door down or waited for his whore wife to leave and be waiting right in the driveway for her to come out and then tell her not to come home.

He should sue Mr. big dick and divorce her.

So how is he fucking anybody or getting his rocks off?

hot tongue because it got frictioned during a french kiss.....??? Ih ih ih, uh uh, ah ah ah, UAH UAH UAH, enough, UAH UAH stop it UAH UAH iiih ih peeew, sigh. Uff. He is a jerk, but a funny one.

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So hubby loses wife to wimp with big cock and by way hubby desribes wimps cock I'd say hubby wants to suck wimps cock. Just another closet fag.

ur a fucking cuckold stumpy fuck u and fuck eminem too

You like the taste of another man's cum in your wife's mouth or pussy. It's not cheating if the other man is better endowed than the husband. It's not cheating if the other man makes more money than the husband. It's not cheating if the wife loves the other man in ways she doesn't love her husband. It's not cheating if the wife loves the other man as much, or more than she loves her husband. It's not cheating if the wife wants a man other than her husband to give her a child.

but his statement was a lie and the divorce proved it.

... is not something I've ever wanted or gone for, but as a piece of writing it expresses the conflicting desires of the husband and also the wife very well. I've never known sloppy seconds as they are called, but I certainly know jealousy as any man does, and I see from this piece of writing what happens to the jealous husband. Of course there are myriad instances of this on Literotica -- this one as a piece of writing for the genre is better than average.

More cucky crap.

Awesome story! Seems like it could be true as night and wonderfully written. Had me on the edge of my seat. Well done!

Once at the house and he saw her with the guy he busts in and takes care of both of them. To swap cum and fuck her while she has the other guys cum in her? Total wimpy loser and the wife now knows who is the alpha male.

How about he goes out and fucks other women then comes home and has his wife suck his lovers pussy juice off his cock...

story with no redeeming qualities. Not a single character to inspire empathy. Poor effort

Big and Stupid more like!

What could possibly be good about a slit wife who cheats?

Giant economy sized cuck. Another cuck author with an intimidating pen name.

Your screen name should be big & WIMPY cause you are a BIG PUSSY and a cuck

Awful.

Wasted minutes

Worrhless!

Wow what a truly deep and loving wife she has and what a strong self respecting husband he was.

Actually nope, this is in the running for the worst cunt/wimp combo ever. I do hope you never wrote again.

well its crap again a guy gets hard on watching his wife get shagged she has a right to do it as all wives and husbands have but getting hard watching it not a man even in a small way but its all fiction aint it nothing like real life so nothing like a good story

Stupid cuck shit

cuck shit name should be smallandapussy

A cuckold story. And a wimp cick, for that matter. Very poor.

No rewal man would react that way; not an agreed open marriage

big and physical huh? Sounds like somebody is trying to make up for weak, wimpy, and ducky! What a joke, LOL

just another cuck story like all the rest poor

What a fucking pussy like all the rest. Must have been written by someone who shared a cell with Bubba and loved it. I bet the author is missing his upper four four front teeth.

Very great concept crushing piss poor ending. No character development.

Better ending... She took the sissy slut with her the next night and the scrawny guy with the big cock, bent him over, spanked his ass till he cried like the little girl he was then his wife's stud fucked his brains out until all he could do was moan like the bitch in heat he was. She dumped him after that. Not wanting a sissy wimp, but a real man. He's now just a bottom bitch for all the studs in the neighborhood.