hey hurry up with the next chapter, don't make me wait so long.
I kept checking back, don't make us wait so long next time i almost gave up
about darn time you updated this story yay, loved it way too short however lol.
But please please for the love of Mike, update this again really soon and not like 6 or more months later.
u gotta come back with an update asap!this story is gettin too good
I'm so glad u decided to come back this story is awesome and I can't wait for the next installment.
I just chanced upon this but I'm loving it. I hope you don't wait too long for the next chapter!
I just read the first 3 chapters of this story and I'm loving it!!!! I wish I had found the story sooner. Cannot wait to find out what happens next. You definitely have another fan. I hope to read the next chapter soon.
So I just randomly found this story and sat down and read all 3 chapters about 5 times. I really hope you find time to update the story really soon because waiting on chapter 4 is already killing me lol.
i hope chapter 4 comes soon
Dammmmmnnn. Yeah that's all I have to say besides bring on more of the tatted sexy azz blond blues.
I like this story and every time I check on it there aren't any new chapters. That is so fusterating please finish this.
Searched a while for a good interacial. So hard to find good new stories. I like your story and they way you write. Hurry up!!
i need to know what is going to happen next. I hope u will be updating soon.
I wanna read what happens next!!!!
What's up with u? U said u was gon have chapter 4 done months ago; where is it? All things aside its a good story and u need to post chapter 4 soon!
Great story thus far. Can't wait to see how you continue it.
Can't wait. It's cruel to let this hanging in the air when the story is just getting better and heating up.
Bring on chapter 4! :)
I've read this 2 many times 2 count hoping tht 1 day chpt. 4 will b up here the next time i read it...please post it soon...it would b even better if u put chpt. 5 up here with 4 lol ;-)
honestly I think this story is funny as hell -- but I like it I'm lookin forward to Ch 4
Love the story but you keep leaving me hanging. When is Chapter 4 coming out? I can't take the anticipation!
Love this story...please finish. Don't leave me hanging!!!
PLEASE FINISH!!! Great story, but it can't end there...
Lmao!! This story is too funny. Tony really ain't shit and I'm trying to see the Justin/Nicole showdown!!!!
That I've re-read these 3 chapters like a zillion times! I.... need.... more!
Damn I need for you to update this story soon!! The writing and plot are excellent.
Please, please, please finish this story, its soooooo good.
the way you've captured their language in this story is fucking excellent, and that's coming from a 19 year old black girl my damn self! So many times reading these stories with black characters I sit back and think "seriously?" people try so hard to convey what they think is black speech and they over compensate and leave a bunch of stupid crap nonsense, this is amazingly accurate, I felt like I was just talking with my friends or reading something about a friends life....it was so spot on! I'm sorry to go rambling on and on but I like to give praise where it is due and it is certainly due here, I could just reach through the screen and kiss you, you did such an excellent job! Can't wait for the rest, pleaseeeeee update soon!!!
I didn't realize this was from 3 years ago! I was so excited to see part four til I realized PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE???
Please?!?! Such a great story & you got me hooked...I NEED to see what happens next.
Sometimes I feel like Nicole and I are the same person! I speak just like her when I'm with my friends (18 btw) . It's ridiculous how well this dialogue is omg. Some authors write really formally when the scene is casual conversation and that really ruins the story for me. But this was great. Kudos to you and I'm glad you're back 👍
"You have nothing to be sorry for...You're just a good girl with a problem."
Lol i have never meet a man who cut women this much slack. It would require them to understand why women date/stay with assholes...and i cant even say i understand in this girls case. Even his best friend can be bothered to mention any of his redeeming qualities and is willing to throw away what i assume is years of friendship for some pussy.
Honestly anyone who could/would remorselessly do this to his best friend...seems like she's just jumping from one type of asshole to another.
But hey its a fantasy right? No big. Fun read, i like the way the dialogue flows it feels very natural to me.
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