by greenmountaineer
your use of sound throughout this drives the read, does something to my head!
your writing always impresses, and this is no exception. your adroit use of form allows the substance of the piece to be paramount, supported by its framework instead of tortured by it. those last lines leave a saddened smile on my lips. this is worthy of a 5 rating, all the way!
I am not familiar with the poem that inspired this, nor the television series referenced, but an enjoyable piece of flummery nonetheless.
One hopes for a bit of protein, though.