Excellent start in this story of seduction. Very well paced, not over or under descriptive either in my opinion. Certainly got me hard and excited to read the next chapter!!
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I will be interested in seeing how you develop the rest of the story. So far...so good. I enjoyed the insight, thought process, and sexual banter back and forth between the characters. Also liked the build up rather than jumping right in as most stories seem to do here.
Again, thank you for a most enjoyable read, and I look forward to reading more from you
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Anonymous10/04/10
Well Done
Please please please -more. You definitely left me wanting more (you left me nicely wet as well.) ;0
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Very Hot!!
Excellent start in this story of seduction. Very well paced, not over or under descriptive either in my opinion. Certainly got me hard and excited to read the next chapter!!
BRING YOU PUSSY TO ANOTHERS ATTENTION
brilliant hot horny story reading this was the old guy watching you cumming hard awesome story very exciting to read now for your next very wet cumming.
Very erotic start
I will be interested in seeing how you develop the rest of the story. So far...so good. I enjoyed the insight, thought process, and sexual banter back and forth between the characters. Also liked the build up rather than jumping right in as most stories seem to do here.
Again, thank you for a most enjoyable read, and I look forward to reading more from you
Well Done
Please please please -more. You definitely left me wanting more (you left me nicely wet as well.) ;0
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