All Comments on 'Monica Ch. 01 of 02'

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Harryin VAHarryin VAover 13 years ago
didnt anyone bother reading the end of this crap after THIS?

.....I was surprised to find that I had taken my cock out and was stroking it as I watched the two men feed Monica their cocks....

Mandy01Mandy01over 13 years ago
Rofl@Harry

Ummm.... you're a masochist Harry! I know I didn't even that far before I skipped to the end and found myself damn glad I did, mate!....giggles

netviper21netviper21over 13 years ago
Old

Dude, its getting old, sorry, but your stories are losing interest for me. Thanks for the good reads from before and take care!

xtremeddxtremeddover 13 years ago
I wonder where this is going?

?

x

WoodButcher57WoodButcher57over 13 years ago
You finally done it

This is the most F_____ up story that you have ever done, sick, sick sick is all I can say. You are getting, no, have gotten boreing, I've had enough of your crapy ideas of a story line.

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
If she had been fucked by one guy,

I could have been sexy and I may have rated it 5*****s provided her husband didn't get a hard dick watching. However, the story was just too crude so the best I could do was to rate it 2**s.

cliffhanger20cliffhanger20over 11 years ago
IT'S A NO BRAINER!!!!!!!!!!

You go back get a phone call cops, story over. Except for the lawyer.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
A WANNA BE CUCK MARRIED TO A SLUT

and is everybody happy so far, TK U MLJ LV NV

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 11 years ago
No way

A now willing cuck watches his wife fuck others. Can ch. 2 save this? We'll see...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Your stories

Some of your stories are OK but most of them are trash and entirely unrealistic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
this is a tough one

I have known husbands that set up wife. but normally hubbie is has been more impacted by more booze than wife has drank

sinstalkersinstalkerabout 8 years ago
Jeez....

What can be said about any man that stands and watches his wife get gangbanged after hearing the two guys in the John? She needs to run from an ass that won't protect her because he might get beat up! Win or lose sometimes you have to fight I think protecting my family is one of them. Surprised the author didn't have him eating her afterwards that seems to be his norm lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
fucking disgusting

1*

implied interracial trash aids-whore

DiscoveringUtopiaDiscoveringUtopiaover 5 years ago
Have to agree with Sinstalker on this one...

I walked in on my first wife one time in a situation close to this. You don't have to fight all seven. One kick to the balls of the one fucking her makes the others very docile very quickly. Amazing how fast assholes can zip up and go.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Yeah honestly if 7 guys beat you up for interfering in a gangbang, it's gonna look like a gang rape and they will be the ones who are fucked. Up their asses for the next 2-5 years. Longer for the assault.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Trash. No real man would stand by and watch his wife get gang raped. On trash would write this.

mattenwmattenwabout 2 years ago

"I was forced to stand there and watch as my wife of seven years was gang fucked" ha ha ha!! The idiots do not want to die out, as this author and his story prove!

BSreaderBSreaderabout 2 years ago
Stupid

Rape apparently is funny to some

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Pathetic

lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 1 year ago

interesting lead in

bobareenobobareeno12 months ago

Ah yes, getting excited to see your wife being gang raped. Such an admirable libido. Saying nothing. Such strength of character; stoic.

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Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...

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