The Insemination Ch. 04

She hates Stewy

He's disrespected in bed.
He's disrespected out of bed.
He's humiliated for life now with his carrying the
lovers name, just to remind her and taunt him.
There is no love for Stewart.

In the dictionary....

...under "wimp"; it says see "Stewart".

Wonderful Progression

This is a great example of the slow rise of humiliation for the cuckold.

Very solid work. I got off half a dozen times making my way through it. I insist you write more.

Ignore these other moronic posters. They must have gotten lost on their way to the truck rally.

Guess if you call yourself "pathetic_cuck"...

you might think this is good. Otherwise, do the world a favor and eat shit and die!

I can understand people not liking the story but telling the author to eat shit and die? seems like an over reaction to me, I mean what has he/she done to you that he deserves such treatment.

Yeah, I mean what's your deal. If you don't like it, don't read it.

Anyway, can't wait for stories from you. Any chance we'll see Oak continuing fucking Tammy?

Why oh why

Why are they still married. She does move love her husband or even respect him. She will probably tell everyone the story behind the kids name and that her husband is a WACC.

this was a dumb fucking ass story

don't quit your day job sucking cock, better yet you probley suck at that.

Good Stuff

I wish you would write some more Urgh01. Your stories are great, i am sure you got some negative feedback but hell that means your doing a good job with this subject matter! One of the best humiliation cuckolding writers i have found on lit.

A perfectly nauseating

Piece of fetish writing. Too bad you didn't post it there.

Would have been better if...

...you made it clear that they continued to see each other behind the husband's back and then verbally humiliated him while they were doing it.

Especially if she told Oak that she loved him now, and not her husband.

Fucking shithead whoever wrote stetwart should have kick her out once she was pregnant she wanted to chaet so she came with an excuse she disrespected him made him eat another man cum how the hell can u say thats love I want a good finishing of this story I want her degraded humilited and made slave by her husband and I want stetwart to have sex wither other women that bitch deserves it.

Nice work

Not the most erotic, but not bad and a good sense of humor; I liked Oak's excuses. I like a tad more realism (no-one cums so hard he wrecks the ceiling) but that's just me.

I don't get the haters, though; the author clearly warns at the beginning that it's a cheating/cuck story and hubbie won't be vindicated. Also, the complaints that Stewie should leave her don't make sense; I mean, no shit, but that's like tuning in to a show like "Walking Dead" and then complaining that zombies are just not a believable concept. They're not, but you can't say it was a surprise. If the un-scientificness of re-animated corpses is going to prevent you from enjoying a show, then don't tune into anything with "Walking Dead" in the title. Also, spoiler alert, you won't enjoy the BioHazard series.

What a ride, you should write more man, this was great

Garbage

How absolutely low the standards are even on a free site if this is the garbage that gets accepted.....

I'm pretty sure everything gets accepted

Thanks for reading. If you don't like my story, why don't you write your own, Anonymous? If that's even your real name. And BTW, stay tuned for more. I think you'll probably read that, too.