All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 22'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hope

I hope this story never ends Ilook for next ch. everyday

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I am loving this story

The unfolding of the two stories of how Sunny met Louis is just great. We already knew Ashley and Jeff, but the cleaned up version was well done. Can't wait until the next chapter is released.

energystarenergystarover 13 years ago
Sweet - i mean Sweet.

You make me wish this was a real story. Thanks.

bigguy323bigguy323over 13 years ago
It's time to pick up the pace....

The story needs to have some conflict and a faster pace.

bruce22bruce22over 13 years ago
Smooth as Silk

And it even has surprises hidden in it. I will read it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Not "Bridge Over The River Kwai"

It's "The Bridge On The River Kwai"...

JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorover 8 years ago
Just another kudos

For fantastic details and genuine characters.

Jason

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
LAUGHING

This chapter could have gone in Humor/Satire (as well as some of the rest of the story). I was laughing out loud (I'm alone) by the time I finished it.

Obviously 5 stars.

Paul in Oklahoma

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