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The Long Weekend Ch. 31

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by Anonymous09/28/10

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I left a comment on the previous chapter (Ch. 30c) entitled "Huh?" and I'm posting in this chapter just in case the author didn't read it there.

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by beachsf109/30/10

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Dear Reader

thank you for your comment i am delighted that you are following the series. I discussed your comment with both Annie and Jr. and they advised that the coupling in the CH6 parking lot was indeed their first. it was almost bonobo like and although not conveyed in the story they were chastened by the experience. It was the first time they had extended private time that sated with sex tension and they let themselves go.

in this chapter they move from purely sex to a deeper more intimate relationship

They thank you for pointing out the in ability of the author to convey adequately the transition

comments always welcom

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