All Comments on 'Rape of a Childhood'

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buttersbuttersover 13 years ago
this will touch many, UYS

you address the darkest places, but refrain from sliding into the maudlin. this puts it out there, asking others to open their eyes - but the sorrow that shows through is in the believing most won't. the world is full of dark secrets

write on, UYS. write on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Doesn't earn its title

The use of the word "Rape" in the title sets a standard of trauma that "dreams shattered" and "buds gone un-nurtured" do not rise to meet. EVERY childhood can claim those, but not every childhood has been raped.

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 13 years agoAuthor
Mine was

Anonymous and believe you me I know what I am talking about, perhaps you don't

fridayamfridayamover 13 years ago
I love this

It is just enough to worry, and the language is tight and expressive. x

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