Omg I loved it I stayed up all night reading these and it was great! ;D
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Anonymous08/14/13
Mistake?
I agree with the other commenters that this is a great quality series, BUT...
Unless your intention is for the mother to know and accept what is really going on here, that last interaction with Megan and Denise seems like a mistake.
In such close proximity, wouldn't Denise have smelled something amiss, especially coupled with any sweat and general disheveledness.
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Omg I loved it I stayed up all night reading these and it was great! ;D
Mistake?
I agree with the other commenters that this is a great quality series, BUT...
Unless your intention is for the mother to know and accept what is really going on here, that last interaction with Megan and Denise seems like a mistake.
In such close proximity, wouldn't Denise have smelled something amiss, especially coupled with any sweat and general disheveledness.
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