All Comments on 'Halloween Party Ch. 01'

by bluknight

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beast26beast26over 13 years ago
Pretty good

This story is pretty good so far! Hopefully you will put up CH. 2!

kathy2b46kathy2b46over 13 years ago
good start

so far so good , some hot sex , can not wait till jason gets his mom

vietvetvietvetover 13 years ago
Too bad:

Jason is so dumb he doesn't know a cock is for the purpose of injecting cum into a cunt.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
It will be interesting to see where this story is going.

A good start and I like the idea of his mother is a horny slut. I hope I'll see the next chapter soon.

Thanks

gotranegotraneover 13 years ago
One Of The Few!

Hot story, hands down, literally! Hopefully, Ch. 01 means there's, at least, on sequel coming, along with the rest of us! For what it's worth, "One Of The Few" means this is one of the few, if any, stories I've rated a "5" that wasn't about, or included, pantyhose. So please take that into consideration next time. Either way, keep writing.

Danno_61455Danno_61455over 7 years ago
THAT WAS VERY NICE

You gave us hard sex with son and gf after the excellent teasing with mother. I think reading your next chapter will be fun too,

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice

Would have loved catching my mother and one of her female friends...had the chance one day while I was home...blew that ( no pun intended) almost caught my sister...flung open her bedroom curtains to scare em and my sister was in her bra...jump the gun to soon...all well

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearabout 4 years ago
Where's the incest?

Ok maybe a bit taboo, but just a bit. Should have been in loving wives, or exhibitionism/voyuerism. Its was an ok story just not what I was expecting for the category it was in.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Story takes 2 long, ought 2be in another category.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aabout 1 month ago

In fiction as in real life, everybody gets through life the best way they can.

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