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by butters09/27/10

so full of sound and movement...

the epitome of change, the essence of autumn.

lovely contrast between the warmth of 'the first ember of autumn' and the hard bleakness of the encroaching winter

works as a lovely metaphor, too, F!

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by Esperanza_Hidalgo09/28/10

Dynamic visuals

once again, tied to the seasons and wind. A very smart little poem.

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by corndog_09/30/10

Very nice

A nice alternative to the usual views of autumn. Consider your line-breaks-- they aren't pulling their weight in an otherwise excellent poem.

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