All Comments on 'Xanadu'

Good for the girls -- and good for you, Nicole for giving a nod to David Eddings. Please keep up your writing. jesse

and great writing!

And damned sexy, too.

A teasing, seductive, and very plausible tale. Your stories slip their characters into sudden, yet somehow inevitable, rabbit-holes of new desire, and it's this very strong vein of realism--along with the deliriously hot sexual release iself, of course!-- that makes them such very fine entries. "Aftermath" was an excellent story, and now I'm very happy to have this one too!

This is like a banana split! Just great.

Ms. Larson, if you still follow Literotica, please write some more! I miss your polished, humane, sexy stories.