All Comments on 'Shadow School Ch. 01'

Darker things seem to be on the horizon...

Couldn't agree more with the person before love it............

Really enjoyed this. Nice pace, good flow, and fun characters.

Really, really good story you've got here. I like the pace and the characters, and I am definitely curious about how this will work out. I'm obviously a bit behind with the story, but judging by the ratings on your other chapters I've got a lot to look forward to!!

Congrats on a very successful first submission! ;)

xoxo-Lily.

This story was alot more than I expected it to be . Bravo never stop writing lol

Pulled me right in.

For some reason I a wanted something to bad to happen to Trenton... Is that wrong?

I love this story. I recently reread it and was sad to see it still unfinished. I'm sure Elias, Damon and William, along with their 'Chosen Ones', are running around in your mind, causing all kinds of chaos. Letting them out would make room for new ideas to grow. Patiently waiting for more.

Confusing and very slow, I don't mean the sex either.

Nothing is explained just a few chicks randomly acting out sexually. No real explanation. Ist a why am I reading this type story? 8 full pages in and I still don't know what I'm reading.

What a load of rubbish.

I know it's 7 years since the writer was here but others might see this and TURN BACK NOW !

Anonymous comments should be banned

Nothing has been added since 2011. Please don't waste your time like i did.