All Comments on 'Nymphocom Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story

Like the direction this is going where he is slowly making improvements.. hope to see more girls soon

lundysonlundysonalmost 13 years ago
excellent

Great sequel to your first chapter. Even though you say English is not your first language, you make very few mistakes that detract from the story. I encourage you to continue writing.

I love the premise, and hope that Francois will find a way to influence more than one woman at a time or alter his own characteristics (such as being able to keep himself from cumming)...guess I will have to keep reading!

LittleprickLittleprickalmost 13 years ago
It's good

You wrote a good story. The fact that François didn't fuck Julie yet is very exciting. You let place for improuvement and it's great. We can look forward to what you will write.

joelappjoelappover 8 years ago

no graphics here either

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
!!

NOT illustrated.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Just one small remark ...

You said in the introduction english is not your first language ( I suppose it's french, like myself ).

As far as I can judge, you write very correct english, and very entertaining stories.

So thanks for the nice stories.

Here comes the remark : about 3/4 of the first page (in this chapter), we read : "the skirt was now nearly up her ankles". I think it should be "hips" , not ankles.

But it is really a detail. Thanks again.

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