Ana Isabel needs a night to remember for true. Don't leave her wanting if you truly love her.
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Anonymous10/15/10
A great story continues.
You certainly have kicked this up a notch. Wonderful chapter very well written and lovely interaction between different cultures. How to continue? Will Ana eventually succumb? could she visit the US? His boss? sex with two lovers? What effect will all this have on his relationships back home?
A lot of possibilities. Anxiously awaiting the continuation.
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Anonymous10/20/10
Wow...Keep 'em coming!
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Anonymous05/21/11
Ana-Maria vs Ana Isabel
her vs here, You have written a really great story. But little things detract and the OCD or should I say CDO readers must be climbing the walls!
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Anonymous09/27/12
Not as sexual...
...but wow. The heights you reached with just the story there were pretty incredible. I especially liked how Ana Isabel went further than I thought she would and, as soon as my expectations changed, not as far as I believed. Well done.
Hot and sexy. Now let's read what Criss got (I probably misspell her name every time :) )
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Anonymous11/25/13
kamehameha!!!
HAHAHAHA Kamehameha had me laughing so hard hahaha
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Anonymous11/10/14
This is what you do best
When you stop "rearranging the living room furniture" in your writing with the endless cavalcade of partners is when you're at your best. Instead of a sociopath,Jack actually becomes more than a one dimensional character. Still not cool with him lying to the girls back home though. Only a child does that.
English
nice...
bet chris is getting double teamed in next room.. hope our gallant hero enters her chambers and joins in lascivious rape of chris's natural charms..
~gary andrews (garyandrewsbodyguard@yahoo.com)
Different
It will be interesting to see where you take this one. Different cultures and aristocracy have a whole different set of rules.
How so very sad; even with the raw, sexual imagery you managed to convey very deep emotion in the part of Ana Isabel. Well done.
Privaledge and its attendent costs...
Ana Isabel needs a night to remember for true. Don't leave her wanting if you truly love her.
A great story continues.
You certainly have kicked this up a notch. Wonderful chapter very well written and lovely interaction between different cultures. How to continue? Will Ana eventually succumb? could she visit the US? His boss? sex with two lovers? What effect will all this have on his relationships back home?
A lot of possibilities. Anxiously awaiting the continuation.
Wow...Keep 'em coming!
Ana-Maria vs Ana Isabel
her vs here, You have written a really great story. But little things detract and the OCD or should I say CDO readers must be climbing the walls!
Not as sexual...
...but wow. The heights you reached with just the story there were pretty incredible. I especially liked how Ana Isabel went further than I thought she would and, as soon as my expectations changed, not as far as I believed. Well done.
Very nice chapter
Hot and sexy. Now let's read what Criss got (I probably misspell her name every time :) )
kamehameha!!!
HAHAHAHA Kamehameha had me laughing so hard hahaha
This is what you do best
When you stop "rearranging the living room furniture" in your writing with the endless cavalcade of partners is when you're at your best. Instead of a sociopath,Jack actually becomes more than a one dimensional character. Still not cool with him lying to the girls back home though. Only a child does that.
Wow!
Even though he didn't fuck her, it was enormously sensuous and sexy as hell. Damn, I'm hard!
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Sad, but chapter 24 is a repeat of the earller Spanish chapter. What a spectacularly excellent read this story has been.
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